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Gochii
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Meh storie iz back!!!
Horified, she flew from that room, not stopping for anything she burst from the oalken front door. Nothing else mattered, nothing but her, and the distance she must put between her and thoes unspeakabull immages she had seen. Eventauly this thought subsided... but the horror remained. So she ran. She ran past houses, over fences, through the old feild... it didn't matter, she was no longer concious of her actions.... her subconcisness was racing dangorously fast in a state of shock. Thoes immages, from the sphere she couldn't exsplain it, but somehow she knew them to be true. Although they hadn't been mere immages, but the real actons of real people, and real monsters. She felt the pain, and the sufforing of all these people welling up inside of here. And before she knew what had happened she found herself at the sparing grounds, still bearing earthy wounds from only recently. Colapsing on the edge of a small pond fed by a trickling fall barly ten feet up, she started to sobb. Not for her self but for the people in the sphere. And with all this violently flowing thorou her mind she curled into a small ball and sobbed harder, as a child with no way to releve some invisibll presure weighing them down heavly she screamed, a loud peircing wail, cutting thru the darkness as millons of tortured souls found a one voice throu this tiny body... the result was not of this eart... but the high pitched cry of something inhuman. And at that mommetnt she was connected to all of them, and they to her. As this faded away she peered inot the watter... and was shocked --to say the least-- as the immage she saw before here, was changing her auborn hair was falling awya, replaced by longer straight black hair... this geamed with a slight gold, and silver hue. Her eyes, she noticed took on a more audibull shade of green, and her skin grew ever more pail, so much so, that the thought of becomeing a ghost actualy penitrated her mind. But most drasticly was her body it's self... it was shrinking, she could feel here weight evaporating from her already small body. This went of for well over an hour, she also coughed up various bones, and large ammounts of blood, ad at one point was horified to see her own thumping heart fall from her throught. At last, exausted mentaly and physicaly she collapsed amongst the pile of gore, and fell into a deep sleep.

Wootageness!!! I'm back in meh story --actually this is the 3d time I've had to re-write this chapter... and quite frankly I think I might loose it at any given time-- Basicly she starts to change and she is connected to all the people.... that part is vert important...





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JkDemon
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comment Commented on: Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 01:01am
Woah! Nice Story


comment Commented on: Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 03:29am
Aaaww tyvm 4laugh



Gochii
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