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enter in my domain...........but be prepared,u will face some challenges

if ur able to get to this journal..........what ever u do....NEVER LOOK BACK
the seacave:..screw this ark....we are finishing TODAY!!!
-dark-don't worry
-shady-be happy..
-writer-.....about what?
-dark-that...*shows school doors opening..*
-writer-AGH!!!...what a short summer?

THE ******** 47 PART!!!

-rayj-... evil
-ray-.... twisted
-hancock-..oh crap..
-ray-..*breaks the chains off*...heheh...
-rayj-..oooh...u may be in trouble.... lol
-hancock-.....what r..y-you gonna do..?
-ray-..*walks over there and suddenly throws a big chair at him*
-hancock-..*breaks it*..oh that-..
-ray-..prepair to die..*she snaps his neck off*
-rayj-............whoa.....
-ray-..easy....now lets get out of here...*breaks her chains*
-rayj-right!!

-shady-........*shakes*
-mogs-what?
-shady-...the..the sound is getting louder...
-mogs-so..
-shady-...so....SO....CAN U ******** SEE THAT WE R DOOMED...DOOOOOME-
-redwing-*slap*
-shady-..thanks i needed that..
-yosh-..retard
-mogs-...shh!
-shady-...omg....look!

what did they see..?

-cross-...hmph....lets go then...
-octopus-...RRRAAGGGHH!!..*the octopus slams his tentcles aginst the wall and it rumbles the whole cave.....everyone felt it..*
-cross-hm!..-cross jumps on the rocks, falling from the ceiling, one by one. He soon jumps on the octopus head*...hello^^
-octopus-..RAWR?..-Cross then digs his sword in the octopus's head and slash down, cutting the octopus in half-
-cross-...and we r done here...*thrusts his sword, making the blood come off, and puts it up*

-dark-....what is this smell!!!?
-sha-...it's gas....
-dark-....gosh....man what the hell dragon.....damn....
-sha-...lets move quickly..
-dark-ok...*they both get up and run till there was no sight of the dragon left..*
-sha-...we are safe....for now..
-dark-....where r we...?
-shady-....hey....omg...DARK!!
-dark-shady!?
-mogs-..DARK!!..*runs and tackles him*
-dark-.....will u get THE HELL OFF ME...
-mogs-yeah this is not working..
-dark-yeah...
-yosh-.......who r u..
-sha-...
-dark-...umm this is shashe...sha for short
-shady-..oh....well hey shady...i mean sha...
-dark-......shut up shady..u have no right anymore..
-shady-rigggght...
-mogs-..so u was the ones making the splashing?
-sha-..yeah since there was water where we was at..
-dark-....and hopefully we wasn't followed by that dragon we pas-
*loud thomping silecned dark-
-dark-..........
-sha-.....
-shady-......can i say we r doomed now?

doom yesh u r!!

-ray-come on u run too slow!!!
-rayj- well u run too fast!!!
-ray-...*sigh*whatever just come on!!!
-rayj-.....DUCK!!..
-ray-..huh..WHOA..*barley dodges a huge spear*
-rayj-what the hell was that!!?
-ray-...idk.....lets keep going....be ready and dodge anything that looks dangerous..

don't die now^^

*cross walks alone in the dark cave and then wanders in a dark room filled with traps*
-cross-..wow.....bloody..
*he soon discovers a computer in the back. He went to it and turned it on. The screen showed 4 screens, 2 had the crew on them...one was blank and the other was dark*
-cross-why is this screen dark...?
*suddenly something hard hit him on the back of his head, leaving him unconcess*

oh no!!

-dark-...run....he is too much for us.!!
-mogs-how u figure?
-dark-..he shoots posion gas that can burn u to death everytime he flaps or moves his wings
-yosh-....u dodge it?
-sha-...somehow...yeah we did..
-redwing-anyway are we gonna run or not cuz....he's right there...
-dragon-......
-all-...sh*t

*ray and rayj sucessfully dodge all spears and arrows that they came across*
-ray-whew....glad that's over..
-rayj-..look a door
-ray-..huh...a door in a cave....?
-rayj-yeah.....it just gets werider....let's go inside
-ray-alright...
*they walked inside and discovered that it was a computer room*
-both-whoa.......
-rayj-...there's like........50 computers in here!
-ray-.......i sense something bad...coming r way...
*the room went dark*
-rayj-...i hate it when ur right...

-dark-so.....what do we do?
-shady-...fight?
-mogs-...run?
-yosh-...SCREAM IN PANIC LIKE IN THE SCARY MOVIES!?
-redwing-.....apparnetly i have a solution...hey dragon...
-dragon-..hmph?
-redwing-...can u talk?
-dragon-.....i can now...
-all-..... eek
-dragon-...now what do u want little girl?
-redwing-can we leave u here in peace?
-dragon-...no
-redwing-.....w-why?
-dragon-....CUZ I WANT TO EAT U!!
-dark-..that figures..
-redwing-...well u know we taste horrible...see..*bites shady*
-shady-YAOWWW!!
-redwing-...eww....salty!!.
(insert pervy thought here)
-dragon-....salty...YEAH!!!...I LOVE SALTY STUFF
-all but redwing-..UR NOT HELPING REDWING!!
-redwing-...oh screw this lets fight him.....
-dark-...hmph...ok

hey everyone....dragon fight!!

-cross-....egh......what...where?
-kimmi-..hey cross...
-cross-.....kimmi....what r u..?
-anu-she tied up like the rest of us..
-janu-and don't try to break the ropes or it will explode
-cross-...wonderful..-_-
-moon and gaara-..AGH!!..*gets shove in the room*
-cross-..what the?
-moon-...umm....hi everybody?

-ray-......
-rayj-.....
*ray and rayj was watching each other's back while in the dark room. Suddently they heard sounds like a computer loading up something.*
-ray-...look.....one computer screen lit up..
-computer-..let play a game ok?
-rayj-..okk?
-ray-...w-what is it called?
-computer-kill...OR BE KILLED!!
-ray-....
*the room lit up by computers. The computers all fused into one being*
-computer-...I .....AM.......COMPUTER LOAD!!

what a lame name.....but somewhat...cool?

-all-...battle start!!!
-dragon-..RAWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR!!!!
*the team circled the dragon and pulled out their weapons*
-dark-haa!!!..*dark runs up the dragon's tail and digs his sword in the dragon's spinal cord. The dragon falls on his back and the rest of the team climbs on his stomach. Mogs turns into a wolf and slashed his belly with her claws. Shady does his new move "galant punch", which makes his fist grow and flaming with power, and he punches the dragon so hard that one of the dragon's organs popped....i mean literly popped! Yosh slammed his spear in the dragon's eye and redwing shot three arrow nukes in his mouth. Sha grabbed his tail and spinned him around, making him hit every freaking rock in the cave and she threw him at the wall so hard it activated the nukes redwing put in and he exploded*
-dark-..job well done...

now with ray and rayj fight

*ray and rayj power up and then ray dashes to compuer load. She grow spirit wings and strikes right through it. rayj summons her pet tiger maxi.
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-rayj-...maxi charge!!..*maxi uses his lighting speed and slams into computer load's
belly and bites through him*
-ray-...come on u can do better-..AHH!
*computer load smacks her with his wires, powered with electrical power. Ray flew across the area and smacks the wall. Blood falls from her face as well as a burned mark too*
-ray-...fu*k...ow..
-rayj-..RAY..AGH!!..
*computer load grabs her with his wires and shocks her with 10,000 volts*
-rayj-...ugghhhh....maxi....full tackle...*faints*
*maxi starts glowing and attack computer load with all his might, but soon gets shocked and poofs away*

that is a hard battle

-cross-hey u two....can u get us out these ropes.?
-kimmi-...plz be careful when u do it too cuz they will explode
-gaara-..i got it..*she cover the rope with her sand and snaps them. They explode ut the impact doesn't hurt anyone*
-cross-.....wow...thanks!
-anu-now what?
*they all look at cross*
-cross-....hmm...we can sneak out and knock out everyone that get in r way and find dark and the rest.
-moon-then we go for the main guy?
-cross-..yep...
-janu-ok lets get in a plan circle now!

the story cooking now..

-dark-...did u hear that...
-shady-...hear what?
-dark-that loud boom sound....sounds like someone hit a wall or something..
-sha-...yeah it sound like it came from the west of this seacave.
-mogs-...hmm....well lets go then!!
-yosh-...one more thing before we go...
-all but yosh-hmm?
-yosh-*draw yoshi sticking up his middle finger on the dragon's belly*
-dark-.....dude......doesn't yoshi even have fingers?..
-yosh-..IN MY DREAMS HE DO..let's go..
-dark-...-_-

does yoshi have fingers?

-ray-....*recovers a lil but is soon inturrupted when conputer load trys to belly flop her*
-ray-ahh!!...*she shoots spirit orbs at him, making massive damage*..gotcha!
-computer load-..SUCH VLIE POWER....U WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME...HA HA HA
-ray-..oh screw you....say byebye..*she uses her new move called "spiritral delete", making the computer crash and wipes out his memory*
-computer load-....AGHHHHH...WHAT DID U........--------...1221121212122-2212121223333-12121121121120...
*computer load explodes*
-ray-....*falls on the ground*...it's over...*crawls to rayj*...wake up..
-rayj-......
-ray-...aw dang....*carries her on her back and she walks out covered in blood*

ray ur so strong!!....no really..

-cross-.....well....that was easy
-kimmi-...we manige to knockout everyone here....
-anu-...wait...shh....i hear someone...
*hears 6 footsteps coming towards them*
-dark-..ATTACK!!!..*dark pops out and hits cross and cross defects it and knocks him back*
-cross-...wait....dark!!?
-dark-...cross!!?
-cross-..DUDE HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN!!?
-dark-..i don't know...what...i think the last two journal entries?
-cross-..yeah awesome
-mogs-...shhh!!....i hear someone else coming...
*one footstep walks towards them*..
-ray-...ah....hah...this pain is....great....ow...
-dark-.....ray?......
-shady-....rayj too?
-rayj-...*just now waking up*...uh......hi..?
-yosh-...HOLY MACK DADDY TWO SHOES!...EVERYONE BACK TOGETHER!!
*all looks at him*..
-yosh-....what..it's better than saying this..."HOLY BASTARDLY BIG BOOBS!!"
-mogs-..permission to slap him hard?
-dark-go ahead..
*mogs slap him across the room*
-cross-...now that everyone is here.....wait......omg......where's kelp?
-redwing-...oh my i totally forgot about her....
-unknown-....SHE'S WITH ME!!!!!!!
*his voice made a earthquake*
-all-HOLY..*the ground cracked and everyone fell through and lands in a huge room*
-all-..oooowww..
-unknown-WELCOME TO MY DOMAIN.....AND THIS IS UR FINAL HOUR...AGAINST THE KING OF THE SEA...BRABOSA
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bra-bo-sa...is how u pronuce it

-dark-..shall we?..
-shady-..lets go!!..
-all-FINAL BATTLE.....LET DO THIS!!
*the boys and girls splits up and surouunds the giant robot. Brabosa stomps the ground and creates a earthquake, but everyone jumps up and lands on the robot*
-dark-shady and yosh...u go up to the head....me and cross will take out the inside alright?
-all boys-right!
*the girls does the same thing*
-brabosa-..hahaha...U THINK U CAN DEFEAT ME!!?
-shady-..TSK THAT WHAT SHE SAID!!
-brabosa-..F U!!
*yosh calls out his little yoshi and starts flying around brabosa. Shady climbs to the neck and starts punching the robot*
-brabosa-..GAH...U DARE HIT ME!!
-shady-nothing but talk mister....
-yosh-..yeah!!!...so bow down to us!!
-brabosa-..NEVER!!!..
-all girls-...THEN DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT LIL BOY!!!
*cross and dark cuts his power supply and gets out*
-cross and dark-..yeah....DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT...
-brabosa-...AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....UGHHHHHHHHHHHHH...HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
-dark-..wha..?
*brabosa breaks through the cave and we r outside now in the air*
-all-WOHA....
-brabosa-..THAT IS IT...U PISS ME OFF FOR THE LAST TIME.....GET OUT OF MY ISLANDS!!!!
*brabosa shoots fire from his mouth and covers himself with it, making every fall off.*
-dark-...sh*t...what is he doing
-cross-we cut off his power supply...
-brabosa-...NO ONE CAN DEFEAT ME NOW!!!!
-kelp-..except..me....*kelp comes out with ice wings and creates a bizzard and cool him down*
-brabosa-..what...no...NOOOO
-all-..this is it..*everyone comes together and power up for one new, big move
-dark-...ready?
-shady-..yep
-cross-...yah
-yosh-...yeah
-ray-yesh
-rayj-.mmhmm
-kimmi-uhh...of cousre
-anu and moon-..am i always?
-garra and janu-..yes
-redwing and kelp-.let do this..
-dark-..sha?
-sha-...im ready!!..
*they create a line and shady spins them around*
-all-team special!!! crazy whip slash!!!
*they start glowing and shady uses all his might and whips brabosa*
-brabosa-...GAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
*brabosa falls down and hits the ocean. Everyone lands safely on the main island and watches brabosa explode*
-all-....and...we r done...
-dark-..sigh....everyone.....let go home..
-all-right....*everyone sleeps till the next moring*

great ending...what will happen next..

next part....everyone goes home...

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special report time!!!

-dark-.....dude....this is like the longest journal entry gosh......
-shady-..i know....anyway we got a special guest to interview today and its
-writer-..ME!
-dark-...my creator..-_-
-writer-what's up?
-shady-how old r u?
-writer- im 16...goin to 17 in dec 24
-dark-awesome....how bout ur carrer in life?
-writer-..umm....im planing to be a videogame maker..
-shady-whos gonna be in it..?.
-writer-..u
-shady-..me?...
-writer-and dark and cross
-dark-......awesome!!!!!!!
-ray-...and not me?
-mog-and me???
-writer-...hmm.....maybe...we will see
-dark-....ok...that time....so....cyz later ppl
-writer-and remember.....don't steal from grown up.....steal frombaby..it's much easier!!
-dark-...exactly!!

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  • User Comments: [6]
    O o k i i - C h a n
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    Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 07:54pm


    WOW that was the shortest action fight in the history off...well your journal XD lol NOW WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTRE XD


    thedarkone15
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    Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 08:31pm


    im not done...i need breaks...come back later..


    hear ed roar
    Community Member





    Sat Aug 09, 2008 @ 09:33pm


    uh...awkward and werid.


    O o k i i - C h a n
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    Tue Aug 12, 2008 @ 02:59am


    ok then?


    R a Y_H i C c U p
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    Fri Sep 05, 2008 @ 01:15am


    Meh:But the real cheat code to defeat the computer load is....*pulls out a game controller* Ray's max combo! double X, down,left, triangle, up, circle, down, square. *dance around*

    computer: UGH NOT double X, down,left, triangle, up, circle, down, square i can STAND IT!!!!! X___x *drops dead*
    Speaker: FATALITY!
    meh:Tee Hee n.n





    (Neji's max combo! double X, down,left, triangle, up, circle, down, square from JAC PRODUCTION ON YOUTUBE n__n Tee hee)


    thedarkone15
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    Fri Sep 05, 2008 @ 01:29am


    wow.......i didn't think of that.... gonk


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