My story I wrote OHHHH READ IT! It Called In the Darkness. tell meh if you like it. cuz if you do I'll post the second chapter. I wrote it on Quizilla.com and well its supposed to be what happens to you(the reader) hope yous enjoy!!!
So your in your room writing in your diary. Your thinking about how much you miss him and that you feel as if he's trying to pull away from you. Your starting to wish that you hadnt told him that if he didnt want to try to get his brother to agree then he could go ******** himself. After all you knew that Tom was only looking out for him and that he didnt wanthim to be hurting. You start to think about what life would have been like if you two were almost never together because of him being on tour and then you having to stay in your hometown because your mom didnt even want you two together to begin with. In pain from shaking so much you stand up and go over to your dresser. you take your dairy and then put it inside your chained box. you lock it just incase your Dad decides to have one of his Privacy checks again. You turn your ipod on and start to listen toAfterlife by AvengedSevenfold. Then you lay down in your bed and stare at the celing geting pull into its darkness. Then suddenly you here im home and Valarie get the f*** outta your room and clean the d*** living room. you wish he could just die and go to Hell already. While your cleaning the living room your dad has one of his checks. You hear him yell your name and come storming down the hall.Unlock this g** d*** box right now. You stand up to him and say no that its yours and you dont have to. then suddenly you regret saying that and try to run. But he grabs you and slams you into the wall. "No dad please" you beg him. "Dont I already have enough scars from you". then he took out his pocket knife and started to cut into your neck.
He makes the knife drag down your back and made an x on it. you scream and then he rips off your shirt and tries to take off your pants. You run up to your room grab another shirt and your dairy box and jump out your window. you run all they way down to your aunts house. you knocked on the door hard knowing that he would come to find you eventually. She opened the door and let you in. "Sweety whats wrong" as she asked you that you could tell that she was going to call your dad and tell him to come get you. Scared to death because you couldnt run from him this time if he got you, you ran out of her house. Running out of breath you fall to the ground. you cough up blood and craw behind the house next to you. your stuggling to put your shirt on and cough up more blood in the process. The people in the house are looking at you like your freaking insane. Mean while your trying to hide from your dad thats right next door to the house that your hiding behind. The people in the house you realize is your dad's boss. "oh no what if he tells my dad that im here" you say to yourself. They come out and take you inside their house ignoring the fact that your trying to get away. You finally give in because your to weak. " no please dont tell my dad that im here" begging them til you throw up blood and what you have ate in the past three weeks. which is nothing but bread and crackers, rarley with a little bit of peanut butter. thats all you have ever aten your whole life unless you somehow convinced your dad to let you go over your friends house. "relax sweety and why are you all bloody and scared"? he spoke with true sympathy in his voice unlike your aunt, who you found out a little while ago was sleeping with your dad.
Blackveilnightmare · Fri Feb 13, 2009 @ 12:24am · 0 Comments |