Right when I awake from my sleeping in the early morning,I awake with eyes that have teardrops desending from them,and see the colors through out the atmosphere with blurry vision,my first thought in the morning is of you,and the negative affect that got thrown on my life cos of your actions.
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Right when I awake from my sleeping time, I awake with eyes that have teardrops desending,from them then I feel the heat of the tear drop rolling in a downward position down my cheeks,and then my vision of the objects that surround are seen through blurry visions with a mixture of micellanious colors.
(Copyrighted by fishyseaz v2, using this poem and then saying you wrote yourself is against the law, and can get you thrown in jail,and also sued)
(This is fishyseaz in another account cos,that account got hacked and then the hacker got me banned.)
(All critisism is allowed)
(Please tell me ways to improve) (I may be adding another improved version so please check back)]
fishyseaz V2 · Tue Apr 07, 2009 @ 09:55pm · 0 Comments |