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Kitara's Journal well,i decided i want to make a journal.i like to write poems,so that what my journail is gunna be about.i like compliments lol .so im going to post my poems .ill be makeing new ones aevery now and then so feel free to check em out!!


Kitara
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this is my first poem i made its like a story
Never lose hope

as i watch my lover disappear in the night. i think to my self What if he never comes back from the war?i know how much i love him and how much he loves me. will i ever see my lover again?i remember all the days we spent together and the laughs we shared how much i wish he didn't have to go.i cry each night wishing he was next to me and letting me know he was safe.i prey to god each night to bring him home to me save and sound.as i watch my lover disappear into the night.oh how i wish he will return home to me safe and sound.

days and nights gone by.a man came to my door holding a sword.he gave it to me and said "there was no trace of him any where"as i watched him walk away,i walked inside and looked at the handle of the sword. my heart pounded as i saw my lovers name carved into it.there i broke down on the floor.i thought to my self why did it have to be this way? still there crying for hours.i laid in bed alone and i said "ill never lose hope". days and nights gone by. but i still never lost hope.

time goes on and the war continues.still no sign of my lover.i keep waiting.but still no note no messenger to tell me hes alright. i keep telling my self he will come home to me.but still nothing changes still alone in bed still waiting. i still cry each night.suddenly one day a man came to my door.he told me they found my lover.as tears stream down my face i ask if hes alright. the man told me he is injured but i believe he will be alright.my tears of sadness became tears of joy. then the man said we are keeping him till the end of the war.i asked why? the man said he still wants to stay and fight.as the man walked away i smiled and felt happy.why? i thought to my self.shouldn't i be sad? time goes by and the war continues.my lover will return home to me.ill never lose hope.

the war has Finlay ended.as i Waite for his return,i Wait to here the door slide open.i waite for hours.no sigh of him what so ever.will he come come home? is he still alive?i sit preying.still no sigh of him.it becomes night and i head for bed.disappointed was not to see him.as i sleep i feel someone touch me.i wake up and see my lover smiling .i hugged him with tears streaming down my face.he kissed me and whipped my tears.after that i spoke nothing.nothing could describe how i felt.the war has ended. i knew he would return to me.i never lost hope and my lover came home to me.





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Kitana Asahi
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 04, 2004 @ 07:25am
Both sad and happy!!! ^_^ What inspired you to write that?


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