Yay! Page 41 is out and I personally like how this one came out. smile It definitely out does page 40 as far as looks are concerned. smile Ah Josh... will your womanizing days ever end? I guess I only know the answer to that. lol. But Bella is quick to react! xd
As I said I really enjoy the look of this page. I guess it's cause I did more shading then I normally, do. If I get someone to help me shade maybe all my pages can look that goo. It would be nice! biggrin Now everyone, I have something important to talk to you about. I will be leaving where I live very soon and I'm trying to get a head by making lots of pages in advance so that way, if I'm left without a scanner or photoshop, I'll still be able to put out page every week or so. sadly, if that's not the case I may have to stop putting out pages for a little while. I guess a lot of you have become accustomed to me putting out pages every week now... but that might have to change soon. I don't want it, but I'll alert everyone in my journal if that time does come.
I'm a bit nervous but wish me luck.
Next page out Next Page:February 14th! (A present for Valentine's day for you guys. smile
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Midnitergrl · Community Member · Fri Feb 09, 2007 @ 06:00pm
Oh Josh! heart
He looks so hot with the rose in his mouth ~Faints~
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BlackFireAngel26 · Community Member · Fri Feb 09, 2007 @ 06:19pm
I really like this page! And here's hoping Bella gets her out before Josh steps in.
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Kuromorigawa · Community Member · Fri Feb 09, 2007 @ 07:24pm
It's moments like these you wish you were a flower...
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Mister Scissors · Community Member · Fri Feb 09, 2007 @ 08:28pm
Lol, I liked the last picture with Josh and all the sparkles. I think Bella's face when she turned to call to Bubbleh, I think it might've looked better with her eyes open. Also, maybe you should make it a bit more dramatic, like when he's crying make him sit in a fetal position like Tamaki from Ouran High school host club or something...I dunno, this is all my opinion. Great work though. ~deideikawaii
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limekola · Community Member · Fri Feb 09, 2007 @ 09:26pm
Actually deideikawaii, that's the very reason why I didn't do it. That fetal position is Tamaki's trade mark. I can't have people look at the image and be like: "Hey, that's Tamaki." There's no worse feeling then when you try to make something different and everyone tells you your drawings look like someone else's.
As for the eyes. It doesn't. Cause with Bella's eyes open she doesn't look as worried. Also it matches with the original face she has and makes it seem like she talked to Bubbleh mere milliseconds after she spoke to Dance. If her eyes would have been open in that part, the open eyes would match. Otherwise all she looks like she's doing is calling Bubbleh and that's that. I want Bella too look like she's calling her with urgency. I also gave it close attention so that way Bella doesn't look like she's bossing Bubbleh around. The first time I drew it, I did it with the eyes open and that's what it looked like. I didn't want to give people that impression of Bella. She's just trying to guide Bubbleh amidst the insanity. Also, there would be less expression in Bella's face since the image is so small.
Normally I consent to critique... but in this case, I have to hold my ground cause I have reasons for what I did in those specific panels.
good luck with moving, bella! and i agree with you--this page looks a lot better. 3nodding
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Grape Sodapop · Community Member · Sat Feb 10, 2007 @ 02:28am
Beautiful work, I'll have to get my pressie for you before you leave.
*doodles frantically*
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Kalin DNom · Community Member · Sat Feb 10, 2007 @ 04:51am
where are you going?? oh...my...god i'm gonna cry!! cryingcryingcryingcrying i love this page!! gorgeous josh piccies, and he's so cute when he's crying!!
Mr. Josh looks absolutely dashing in that last panel! [I hope he doesn't bite on a thorn though >o<] I really like how you shaded his hair and Dance's eye in the second panel.
Dance's eyes look a little blank in the the last panel?
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shiyonin · Community Member · Sat Feb 10, 2007 @ 09:09pm
Okie dokie, i was just putting up suggestions. xp
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limekola · Community Member · Sat Feb 10, 2007 @ 11:59pm
Ooh! I almost didn't comment on this page! surprised Which is a crime cause it's very pretty! I really like it when you shade your pages Bella. It just really looks great! heart I also really like all of Bella's shots! heart Not to mention Josh's rose scene! Hehehe... he looks way to cool! xd Can't wait to see what's next!
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Mon Feb 12, 2007 @ 08:34pm
I have to say once more that your artwork on this page is sooo good. that last panel was perfect. ^_^
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Honebar · Community Member · Tue Feb 13, 2007 @ 02:38pm
Josh is so smooth! xd
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Shinja_Mizuno · Community Member · Thu Feb 22, 2007 @ 06:19pm