One day long ago, in the time of the ancients, lived a young girl and her name was Leeley this is her story............come on mom you're taking so long lets get outta here it's creepin me out. no!, said her mother, i need to find those flowers they are very important, just then a weird picture shot in to Leely's mind, a little boy screaming in pain, she was apperantly looking through the monsters eyes, then suddenly the picture changed she was looking through the boys eyes and right when she was going to see the attackers face....leely screamed then fainted.
hey all who are reading this you just got done with the first chapter i'm sorry if all the commas and things are in the wrong places....but i don't exactly know where to put them...but anyway...putting all those things aside...please tell me in comments if i should go on or if you liked it....