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Our story begins with Luna, an average little girl, She loved to draw, she loved sweets and playing in the rain, Even though her parents didn't like that because they thought she'd get sick, you see Luna was always a sick child, she always had a cold or worse most of the time. It's was a normal rainy day as she got dressed in her white sundress, white rain boots and headed outside, her mom calling to her, 'Luna, Honey be careful, if you get your feet wet come inside as soon as possible, I don't want you sick!'. Luna just sighed and nodded to her mother, she was about 6 years old as she went out to play, opening the door, closing it gently and running into the yard. The neighborhood had always been safe, no break ins, no killings, nothing so her mother usually never worried. Luna giggled as she splashed in the puddles with a very light mist falling on her, making her glasses a little foggy but she didn't care. Due to the dreary weather nobody was really around, she didn't notice the lack of people but she did noticed the air seemed a bit...Disturbed but she went on playing like normal. After a little while of playing she noticed a van had been going up and down the street slowly a couple times then had stopped across the road, she stopped and stared for a moment figuring it was time for her to head back inside, as she went to turn she was met by a rather large man that quickly grabbed her, covering her mouth to muffle her screams, she felt a soft, damp cloth. As she took in desperate breaths, trying to scream she became light headed, What was that smell..? Why was she getting light headed..? The cloth covering her mouth had been soaked with chloroform. Within a matter of ten seconds she was out cold, the man scooped her up and ran to the van where his accomplice awaited, opening the sliding door on the side of the van, him jumping in and they speeding away. She slowly faded in and out of consciousness in the van, she would awake for a few seconds, letting out soft whimpers, scared and confused, before passing right out again. Where were they taking her? Why were they taking her? What's going on...?
- Title: Asylum: Chapter 1
- Artist: SteIIa V2
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- Date: 06/06/2014
- Tags: asylum chapter
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- fruit4you - 09/29/2014
- A few run on sentences here and there, and you didn't use Quotes " " to identify spoken words. Some of the sentences don't flow very well, but a great start. Just keep at it. smile Great idea. I love it smile
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