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By: KJ
Out in the open,
We never talked, or chat,
While in private,
We never took a nap.
We went places,
We played games,
We hung out,
We changed names,
We took gambles,
We took bets,
We took lots of stuff,
But I never took my chance.
Of all the times,
Of all the whens,
I could never ask you out,
Or take a turn at teh bend.
My tongue was tied,
My knees were restless,
I sat along,
Waiting for that chance,
But when it came,
I never did take that chance.
To all those times I could've kissed you,
To all those times I could've hugged you,
Instead I just sat there,
Frozen in a field of blue,
I missed those chances.
When we talked about crushes,
I honestly thought I could do it,
But instead, I joked accordingly,
Because I thought you wouldn't agree.
But that time, I was so wrong,
And you set me free,
These jokes I now despise,
I missed my chance.
Now it all seems so fast,
As all these chances are past,
I'm too embarassed to talk to you anymore,
Because of the sole reason,
I missed all those chances.
- Title: I Missed my Chance
- Artist: TintedIce
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Description:
Well, I fell in love with my best friend, I always hung out with her, and everything, we even shared drinks, and foods, there was nothing that could seperate us. but then, I turned shy to her, I don't know why. I became jealous when she was around other guys, I really hope that she can see this..
Because we started out as friends, and I fell in love with a girl named Aya. I'm sorry for deserting you, I was too scared, but now I understand. I love you now. - Date: 11/16/2008
- Tags: missed chance
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Criminal Crescendo - 12/10/2008
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wow! u have a lot of comments, but anyway xd
i luv the poem! its very nice and very tru!
5/5 i agree u write well! good luck! - Report As Spam
- Only Becca - 12/10/2008
- The wording is a bit choppy, especially at the beginning, so you need to work on that. The emotion is very good; you write well. Good job, 3.5/5 rounded up to 4/5.
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- MyHeartsTaken - 12/10/2008
- this is really good lol
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- assassin number 392 - 12/10/2008
- i agree with Goddess of Knightmares. alot of people can agree on this and i am one of many. 5/5 take a look at my fiction entry, Running.
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- iMuffinator - 12/10/2008
- Among many others that can relate to this, I am with them. 100/5
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- iiRaNdOm_cOoKiEs_rAwR - 12/10/2008
- nice.... xd
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- XxSmarterxX - 12/10/2008
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I think I know how ou feel.
I meant to say fell instead 'feel' on my last comment.
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