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What is it about you that affects me so?
The play of sunlight on burnished auburn hair,
The storm-fire glitter of your eyes,
The touch of your finder and
The heat of your breath?
I don't kow.
That scares me more than it should.
Every moment with you leave me weak;
Help me...
I can't stop shivering.
My legs tremble at the merest thought,
My heart beats wildly.
Imprisoned.
Lying here in the warm, still night,
Wandering helplessly,
Desire my only guide.
I burn for you.
You make me forget who I am;
You make me lose control.
Lose myself.
You dance through my dreams,
The ghost of a beautiful warrior,
And I,
Lonely and beguiled,
Can only follow.
- by JeanMorgan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Lose Control
- Artist: JeanMorgan
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Description:
The thing is self explanitory.
I want her, can't have her, I love her.
We all know the same sad story.
Poem turned out better than that sad story, though...
Comment! ^^ - Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- JeanMorgan - 07/17/2008
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You're right. It should be "fingers".
Thanks for pointing that out.
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- The_Huntsman_Of_Lore - 07/17/2008
- Wow, MBB... petty much? Are you really yipping over a typo? I really like the imagery you used, Jean. I always like reading your stuff. You put so much soul into it. Great job!
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- blackthorn12 - 07/17/2008
- my love nice its intricacy and simplicity showed how you are .....enjoyed it alot
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- Mrs_Black_Bear - 07/17/2008
- you might want to do a grammar and spelling check on this one Finder? I think you meant finger
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