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To bad for you that you took her.
To bad for you that you chose the white rose.
Look a bit more closely next time.
Maybe you won't choose the witch who you thought was your life.
Maybe you'd be free to talk to me.
And I'd be your bride.
But look at you, no difference.
Learned nothing, that was taught.
I gave you a lesson but it turned out to be nothin'.
All this time, I waited out, in the dark hoping for...
You to come back.....
[Chrous]
I was the red rose, so freely and brave.
But you chose her instead, which had a heart of most hate.
I gave you all the chances, that I could give.
But you came back with no damn difference.
No damn difference means your rejected.
So, bye-bye.
3 years later you come back.
I was still young which you didn't have.
Now you notice that it was an advantage if you chose me.
Now look at me, so young and all.
What do you have? That'd match moi.
You have nothing compared to me.
That why I told you to look ever so clearly.
But now you can't complain no more.
Because were coming to an ending of our story.
[Chrous]
I was the red rose, so freely and brave.
But you chose her instead, which had a heart of most hate.
I gave you all the chances, that I could give.
But you came back with no damn difference.
No damn difference means your rejected.
So, bye-bye.
I'm sorry but this is how it's ending.
I'm sorry but if you paid more attention.
I'm sorry but I was taken by someone, someone who is better....
than you.
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- Title: My Love Garden Story
- Artist: acnll246
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Description:
This lyric took me 15 minutes to write! Please check out my other lyrics, Good-Bye...many people liked it, hope you feel the same for this! Hope you enjoy!
Story:
This guy came into the love garden, he choose a white rose(Really to tell the truth, the witch) instead of the red rose(me). Sometime later he found out and wants the red rose instead but I rejected him for putting me as second so...hope you enjoy!
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: mylovegarden acnll246 rejectedlovesong
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Comments (7 Comments)
- challen08 - 05/05/2009
- nice one hahah love the way it ended haha i cant think of a melody though, haha but very nice.
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- Call_me_lovely - 07/17/2008
- I love it! I'm such a fan of you sister lol. 5/5
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- sumigotchi - 07/17/2008
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i dont mean to critize but the first line and the second the "to" should be spelled "too", it gives more meaning
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- Call_me_cutie - 07/17/2008
- I love your song lyrics! The last one was super and this one is super-duper! 5/5
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- ProtoDemn - 07/17/2008
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Good story, not bad but most songs sound nttr w/ rhyme, so that couldve made it bttr, but not bad at all. 4
2 more things, can u rate my 2 songs on da arenas and the best songs take time, not 15 minutes to write, take time and ur songs will be bttr next time, still 4 - Report As Spam
- High Priestess Aurora - 07/17/2008
- not bad!!! luv the fact that you didnt settle with him when he came back and then you found someone better!!
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- acnll246 - 07/17/2008
- Hope you like it!
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