Crystal Lake

• Artist: Pirate Tart
• Description: I wrote this last year when I visited crystal lake in Northern Michigan.
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: love crystal lake pretty emotional

I watch as the water caresses the shore
it’s liquid fingers reaching for more
the sand giggles and releases a rock
waiting for it’s playmate to talk
and the water answers with smooth pleasing sounds
laughing low into the ground
they reach for each other once again
an eternal rocking never to end

The wind softly folds over the water, as the liquid lets out a sigh
a perfect picture and a perfect surrender all under the dark night sky
a simple breathe and all the world will slip off your back
in this paradise you are calm in this paradise there is only one fact
you aren't perfect and thats okay because when your here no one blames.

Comments

[Luna Deslumbrado]

wow. without looking at the picture, i could picture it in my head

[Schmibble]

It was good, though you might want to check your spelling in the second part. "Breathe" threw me off and I just wasnt feeling it anymore.