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It reads my mind,it hurts my heart,but worst of all it tears us apart.
I cant stand to see all this misery.
Waiting to find me distantly,inside this dome of pain and buffering.
All this hate is eternal suffering.
I dream of you when I close my eyes
and then I see, all your lies.
Why?
Because you thought I was a fool?
You only made it worse thinking of me as a ghoul.
And now, When i try to cry,all these tears are already dry.
But I can keep hope.
Do I still love you? My answer is "Nope"
It disappointing knowing you didn't try to keep our love.
My heart still hurts, but I'm as free as a dove.
And in this world where everything starts.
Your love me for has went below the charts.
Im done with love. Im done with fear.
It's about time we noticed, that the messenger is here.
- by Acelin Rae |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: Is this what love is to you?
- Artist: Acelin Rae
- Description: Read some more of my poems in my journal.
- Date: 07/19/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Brok3n_H3art33 - 01/03/2009
- Nice. 5
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- Savior_of_the_Red_Moon - 01/03/2009
- Bravo bravo. i usually don't like poems that rhyme because they sound cliche but you pulled this one off very nicely. also, i really love the intense emotion in this.
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- NefariousShark - 07/20/2008
- wow this poem is amazingly structured . It's really good. I can actullysee what's happening to the two characters.
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