this is true love

• Artist: Akirekira
• Description: one of my first poems...i wrote this...soon after i told the peson i liked, that I liked them, they told me that they wern't ready for a relationship...i hope you like it...
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: true love

TITAL: This is True Love


My hear belongs to you,
and you alown my knight,
my love for you has grue,
like a rose,
brightly and in sight,
this love I never new,
it cannot be true,
this love brought by you.

After thinking I thought I might,
tell you my feelings,
hopeing it would be alright,
Tonight,
I recite,
the words inside my head,
befor I go to bed,
and wright them down,

I'm not upset,
and I don't regret,
the words that I have said,

I thought I knew,
but my bleeding heart still belongs to you.


By, Akirerocks
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Comments

[Rune5302s_girl]

i liked it i thought it was cool i can totally relate!

[Hatori Amos]

Wow. Your spelling is terrible. It might have been good if the spelling had been fixed. But, you get points for propper punctuation.

[Akirekira]

i no...TT,TT

[allycatanime]

hey, coolio! fix spelling!

[t-vamp123]

i really like it, but change your spelling

[happysadgtttg]

nice....fix up on the spelling errors

[axelpwnsuall]

i get it and its pretty good....but the spelling is just....bad...
4/5 for bad spelling usage.