no title yet, maybe: "school"

• Artist: ilio wahine19
• Description: I wrote this a long long time ago, so it's not any good [ along with everyone of my other so called poems]
• Date: 11/02/2008
• Tags: title

There was nothing but black
I try to yell
No one heard me,
No one could
No one cared
I want to move forward
but never did
I'm traped....

the bell rings
everyone to class

Comments

[QueenxofxSekyd]

I'd give yourself more credit. Maybe there are better words you could use, but I like the concept. I wouldn't necessarily give up on the poem smile