Sitting Down.

• Artist: RSfreak209
• Description: This is a poem that i am writing for school.(project).Plz tell me what you think.
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: sittingdown

One cloudy morning i was sitting down,
I was looking at mother Earth and trying to get anger off of my mind,
But it was hard,
Of how red my mind was i still calm,
I think i was angry that i could not think what i was angry of.

but still i sat wondering,
Wondering,
Wondering when......

Comments

[ilki]

Nice words but arrange it differently to make it flow. Writing for school sucks, at least for me I can't think and I lose myself in words that make no sense but once the assingment is over the poem becomes great...but hey everyone works in different ways. Read the poem out loud to yourself and give yourself a rating. fix what you want to fix and enjoy your poetry first before you hand it in. ^_^ good luck!