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Broken
Shattered
I lay here
You just walk past
Not noticing
You glance in dismay
But show no emotion.
Broken
Shattered
I stay here
With no one to pick up the pieces
Alone in the darkness
Left with nothing
Only pieces of my shattered self.
Broken
Shattered
I lose myself
Pieces go missing
Suddenly, putting me back becomes impossible
I’m unsure of what to do
Completely lost.
Broken
Shattered
I remain here
On the cold, hard floor of reality
Cracked and fractured
Until someone comes for me
But by then, I’ll be gone.
- by Darling-Dani |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: BROKEN
- Artist: Darling-Dani
- Description: A poem I wrote when i was having a bad day :( It doesn't rhyme tho LOL! Comment please :) i adore reading the comments everyone leaves me :) constructive criticism is welcomed :) ENJOY!
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: broken
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xxmellymelz09xx - 12/17/2008
- lol i agree wit ur recent comment... WONDEROUS!!! lol WONDEROUS!!! WONDEROUS!!! jus compleatly WONDEROUS!!! lol
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- Evil_Genius_Chemist - 12/06/2008
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This poem can only be described in one glorious word.
WONDEROUS! I feel the emotion radiating from the screen as I read you poem. Again, WONDEROUS! - Report As Spam