Goodbye Note

• Artist: Drakes_Final_Fantasy
• Description: What I belived that was being said.
• Date: 12/12/2008
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As sun fades to moon, and wilted flowers forget how to bloom, I hold in my hand this Rose. This Rose symbolizes our love, it is beautiful and deligate, but eventually dies if not cared for. This is why I must hold back my feelings for you, if our love dies I don't think I will be able sepres my tears that you saved me from the first time we met. With this note, I warn you not to attach yourself to me or you may feel the cold I feel everytime I think of how to say goodbye. However there is the hope of one day feeling the warmth you bring me as the sun does the Rose.

Comments

[Xxhells bloodxX]

hmmm ish ok
-_-
(im not the one to like love poems)

[sexygirl100141]

it was good way to go it was so in touch with love

[The-Suicide-Angel]

KEVIN... I write soooo much better than u..... you might have better grammar, but I have more Girls than u :O!!

[The-Suicide-Angel]

HORRIBLE =(( I write better than you =))

[wiccanmother_zoey]

well dear, this is quite the romantic, well-written piece. For some reason when I envisioned it, I saw wings on your back...*shrug* you were beating them, and there was a soft music. ...no i'm not crazy...that just means that there is indeed plenty of emotion in this work, and you did a fantastic job with imagry and with getting the proper emotions out there in words! Good job, and keep up the good work dear! 5/5

[DJKenneth Starz]

KEVIN -.- you never told me you knew how to write poetry =D!!!

gosh... reminds me of when I use to write...=P GOOD JOB

5/5

[Sintreri]

I like this, It makes me want to draw a picture of someone standing under the moon, holding a beautiful rose. Very visual and emotional ^^