"Gone"

• Artist: xxmellymelz09xx
• Description: a poem i wrote 4 english class (yea i kno almost all ma poems r fo english class lol) ah well hope ya'll like it <3
  
  i got anoda 1 comin, its called.. uh idr right now actually but its 1 i wrote fo english class, i got 2nd place though grr (then agaIN i never win anythin, so dats good enough 4 me lol ^_^) uh ive been blabbin on to much now,...right? uh akward....ok well.... enjoy...
• Date: 02/07/2009
• Tags: gone

Gone forever
left with no remains.
Not a smile, not a breath,
You took my heart and fell with shame.

I tore at your spirits.
Yanked out your heart.
I made you utter in despair.

I showed no sympathy.
Ripped you apart.
Made you feel like I didn’t care.

I’ve let you go
so far away.
I brought you down
with my own dismay.

Now I think of you,
and cry for you.
But maybe now I’ll understand.
That you’d be here
wrapped in my arms,
if I gave you a helping hand.

Comments

[lime green pop]

thats pretty good
better that i can

[290DarkStars]

sounds like the opposit end of my poem "Dismissed".anyway... I wanna know what the crap! How do you make such ownage-to-the-core-gotta-read kinda artsy poetry? Man YOUR good!

[myKNEESare-chiKNEES]

me likey :>