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Biking
I love to ride my bike
It sometimes gives me a fright
I look for jumps and bumps
and hills for thrills
I ride with my bro
and he's always to slow
I go ahead
but then he wants my head
The wind is soothing
but sometimes it's too cooling
it bites my hands
something I can't stand
It's always fun
to be on the run
I watch the trees come and go
remembering when my grandpa died long ago
that dreadful evening
I could never forget
when they told me
that my grandfather has passed away
No matter how old
no matter how bold
I will always love to ride my bike
and I will never forget my grandfather
and the day he passed away
- by golderner45 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/04/2009 |
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- Title: Biking
- Artist: golderner45
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Description:
This is my first poem I have ever made. It's for homework lol. I hope you enjoy my hard work :D
i knowit kinda sucks but i tried lol - Date: 03/04/2009
- Tags: biking
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Sunafire - 03/04/2009
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I actually like this poem, about doing something fun, yet relating this to a sad event, it's a very human and truthful thing.
You have good potential, and some nice rhyming going on smile
For your first poem, pretty good!
Try using some more metaphors and similies to give it a little more depth smile - Report As Spam