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I travel down the road,
And I lost the way,
My shining light,
Went away today,
Leaving shadows in dismay.
Have I upset the world?
Making backs turn,
My eyes water from the wind,
As I fall into pits,
With nobody to catch me,
But i'll stand up again,
And take on the shadows,
With my bare hands.
As shadows form in the night.
I hug myself tight to the cold,
My shining light,
I know will never turn,
And come back again.
Have I upset the world?
Making backs turn,
My eyes water from the wind,
As I fall into pits,
With nobody to catch me,
But i'll stand up again,
And take on the shadows,
With my bare hands.
The crying and dying,
The laughter and smiling,
I see know more,
As bodies fall to the ground,
The crying and dying,
The laughter and smiling,
Exist no more,
In the world I live,
Have I upset the world?
Making back turn,
My eyes water from the wind,
As I fall into pits,
With nobody to catch me,
But i'll stand again.
And take on the shadows,
With my bare hands!
Have i upset the world?
Making backs turn,
Noone will catch me,
But just kick me when i'm down.
- Title: Down the road
- Artist: Yuukimito
- Description: My first attempt of writing song lyrics, hopefully it'll be good, please comment.
- Date: 04/25/2009
- Tags: dont understand
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ObsessiveSiriusFanGirl - 05/03/2009
- This is beautiful. I love the perserverance=P
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- arthelcargill1994 - 05/02/2009
- Oh. My. God. I think my stomach ACTUALLY flipped over when I read this. It's got so much heart and soul put into it. You should really show this to more people! 5 Star all the way! Man, I wish I could hear the tuning......
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- Yuukimito - 04/25/2009
- Thank you, I am surprised, though the vote thing says two....maybe it happened ealier. However i'm suprised someone liked the song, i thought i was better at poetry lol
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- Fantastic Nightmares - 04/25/2009
- Very nice! good job. 5/5
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