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There was a time when lovers
would smile and tell each other
"forever you'll be mine."
but it all seem to change when his promise breaks
The girl cries and curse the day they ever met,
And think about things that she didn't ment
The boy regrets the things he said and do, And wishes to change
but, time flew.
The girl met someone whos love is bold,
forgotten the boy like a blur.
the boy cried and committed suicide all for love
that didn't last for a lifetime....
- by Emiko-Chan-Rawr |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/23/2010 |
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- Title: Forever??
- Artist: Emiko-Chan-Rawr
- Description: its a poem i made i hope you like it!!
- Date: 01/23/2010
- Tags: forever
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xxX3mo HeartedXxx - 01/24/2010
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i lke ALL OF IT i might add :]
great poem
keep it up.
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- FieryHeartedAngel - 01/23/2010
- I loved the poem, until the commit sucide part, but the rest of it was good.
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