The Seventh Night

• Artist: Bardock07
• Description: This is about how it took a guy who had a dream about this girl for 6 nights and he couldnt remember her face. He has longed for this girl and on the seventh night he remembers her. And now he has hope to find her for real.
• Date: 07/14/2010
• Tags: seventh night

This is the seventh night
And I have yet to remember your face
I can not draw it to light
But I'm sure its nothing I can replace
Tonight I will capture a glimpse of your beauty

I have struggled through the damn day
This restless soul yearns for so much more
I look for you but my mind goes astray
Could it be I'm heartsore
Tonight is the seventh night that could end it all

This cold day ends I lay asleep
Looking around I search for you
Why are not hear as I weep
Your beauty is something I never knew
Tonight you end on the seventh night

I see you your so near
The beauty of you grabs a hold of my heart
At last you are here
Now the real challenge gets to start
I found your face on the seventh night
But how many nights will it take me to find you when I am awake?

Comments

[Ash-Max1]

i like it. it has emotion and a purpose and sometimes if you look at what ou write you will find reality with in it and with in youself 5/5

[jth12550]

I thoroughly enjoyed it, its rare to find poetry and lyrics on here with a solid sense of rythm, I liked the theme, and the emotion. 5/5.

[Der Uhrwerkdoktor]

I actually really like the story, 5/5. rate me back?