Easy

• Artist: He Will Knock Four Times
• Description: sorry it doesn't rhyme!! This is another sugar induced idea. . .most of my poems are!
• Date: 08/10/2010
• Tags: easy

Is it easy to tell
Yourself a lie?
To make your mind believe it
When your body
Doesn't
To tell yourself
In the darkest nights
When you are all alone
That you enjoy the
Loneliness
That it makes you
Who you are
Even as you deafly
Wipe away tears

Comments

[GazeRukii]

Thats deep O.o

[Echo Ligeia]

I like it. It's simple, and doesn't have the appeal of more flowery poems, but is very honest. Although the line "to make your mind believe it/ when your body/ doesn't"...there's something wrong with the grammar there, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Otherwise, good work!