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METAL WILL NEVER DIE
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"Just don't let go"

She took me to a place where there was pain and suffering .
But when she left me their crying.I feet like something inside me was dying.
But there was all ways someone there beside me.They stopped me from slitting my wrist. I never left her side even when she didn't want me their.
But when anger flared. she got real scared.but when i toled her i loved her she didn't seam to care. I cant take this pain i have nothing left to gane.but when things go bad it gets better in the end JUST DON'T LET GO!!!


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metallicaisawsom
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comment Commented on: Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 02:37pm
good job i love it heart heart heart you are a good writer. u rock


comment Commented on: Tue Sep 25, 2007 @ 07:03am
other than some spelling errors its a good one if u really need help spelling download microsoft office or something with spell check but other than that great poem domokun domokun domokun domokun xp xp xp



mekathefallenknight
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x-_AriStoCraP_-x
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comment Commented on: Fri Sep 28, 2007 @ 12:17am
Pretty good, some spelling errors. I can help you write poems, trust me, people say I'm good. Other than song lyrics, I've got some stuff I did on my journal.


comment Commented on: Mon Dec 31, 2007 @ 07:55am
it's really beutiful in a sweet....emo kinda way, i like it. mrgreen



Brandy The Cadaver
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Rambo Suicide
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comment Commented on: Tue May 12, 2009 @ 11:16pm
domokun awesome


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