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I usually post bits and pieces of my work as a writer. Check it out if you're interested. Occasionally I'll input some stuff about what's going on with my life or ask for inspiration or encouragement, so look for that too!
Writing post, finally! Woohoo!!! This is just a poem I wrote during CATS at school.

In the midst
Of the blackish mist
That is the truth
Of one's passed youth
How does one see
What is not clear <- Need a better word here...
But is so true
So true indeed?
The path is clear,
But to what ear,
Does the bell ring?
For if it rings,
Then it then means,
No more for thee
To whom the bell rings.


I wrote a second one, but it's not in my notebook anymore. confused Anyway, as always, accepting comments! ^.^






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Katie_rae_rae
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 01:20am
i loved it!!!!!
the word really isnt even need so you can just erase it or give me a little more and i might be able to help


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 30, 2007 @ 02:43am
Lol, thanks! ^.^ I think "How does one see, what is not clear" sounds kinda.. dumb/obvious lol.



Noumenae
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Katie_rae_rae
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 31, 2007 @ 03:04am
transparent


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 31, 2007 @ 03:07am
Hmm, it fits, but it sounds a bit off to me.. ahh well. xd



Noumenae
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Katie_rae_rae
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 31, 2007 @ 03:16am
lol


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