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Death Blooms
Dark for fear of failure
an inner gloom as wide as an eye
and fermenting roiling hate
death grip in my veins
unveiling rancid petals
flowering forth foul nectar
a space between a blink and a tear
Death blooms






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xx_bonelord_xx
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 17, 2007 @ 05:54pm
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 20, 2007 @ 08:00pm
wow, is that yours? It's cool!



NikkoShiro01
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Livana Mingan
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 03, 2008 @ 06:38pm
did you think of that on your own......wow thats really kool.......i wish i could write like that sad


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 10, 2008 @ 09:06pm
well i must say that this one is the best that i have read....xD
its really good better than mine infact i suck...lol u should read mine i don't think anyone has said anything about it yet but who knows...lol but only if u want to
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very good poem!
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oraofsadness
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sniggR
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 06:41am
Dude, that's pretty awesome. You've inspired me! mrgreen


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