Something i just thot up let me know wat u think
" We stand here told that this life has been taken from this world. We don't know how for sure all we know is that this lady, laying in this coffin is dead. The dead will not return to tell us about thier past. My sister lays in this coffin and suposidily no one knows how she ended up falling off that bridge. Do you get bruses up and down ur body from falling off a bridge? yea u might hit ur head but u don't get bruses that bad. I always said that her boyfriend was no good.
Sence the day she started dating him i knew. we all did but never admitted it. We all knew that she loved him and all he loved was acohal. We all knew that he drank alot and that she was always with him when he did. But something that she hid very well was all those bruses. From all those nights he drank he became voilent. He took out his anger on my sister. Every night i would get a phone call while he was yelling. Always the same thing "What do i do? i know i messed up but what do i do?" She would drop the phone and he would have his belt of something contiuiously agaist her bak. I sat there every night and listened to every beat. To every swear at her. To every scream. Then she would get on the phone again and say "it ok now sissy" But she was hurt so bad that she didn't know it.
She said she loved him and that she would never turn him in because it was her falt anyway."
Police walk down the carpet to the dead womans boyfriend and arestes him.
"I know how she fell of that brigde" her sister continues, "she was looking at the water and was pushed. I was standing right there when she hit her head and fell into the water. I was the one who went after her. But now she is gone and that is all there is now. And now there is one less murder out on the streets and that is all there is now." she steps down and walks out of the building crying.
so what do u think? just something i thought up while walking home from work this evening.
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