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Poetry, Ive come up with.
Heres a simple poem ive written.

Raven's wings stirring the ashes,
claws scraping the bare flesh,
as evil stirs; and vision blurrs,
your lifes a mess.
Pecking, ripping, tearing,
never once declaring innocence,
Feathers of ash and dust,
cover all thats left of lust,
and they slowley drift down,
to the skeletal remains on the ground.
Black eyes still peering into your soul,
avenging the heart of the fool..
that it has just devoured....
...in its merciless feeding hour.
It caws happily as you go forth,
and take the wrong road on deaths narrow fork,
Meeting its master of death and pain,
and only him, the raven is to blame.
Raven are the eyes of the devil they say,
you now know better to this day,
as the beast of death and dismay,
cleaned up your dead corpse decay;
Now swiftly....the raven flies away.



Well thats it. And yes I WROTE THIS MYSELF! No help, no copying. Please dont copy this. My poems are my pride. So what do you think?






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-Pyro_Wulf
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 21, 2007 @ 11:37am
That's pretty cool Kurenia! You're a great poet! Gotta love the darkness in it...


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 21, 2007 @ 11:40am
Aw thanks pyro! Yes come to the dark side... we have cookies! lol ^ ~ thanks for your comment!



Kurenia_wolven
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kumori698
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 22, 2007 @ 09:37am
Its very nice and work on more poems and try to make them rhyme more. smile


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 24, 2007 @ 08:32pm
Not all poetry rymes ya know o-o



Kurenia_wolven
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Matt_Deathnoto
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 10:54pm
that was deep crying


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