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To Live Again or to Never Die
By Jonathan Young
Suggested by PunkRock NaNa


One fate everyone shares is that death will always come.
True that one will say is that we are born again.
Some would say that he is drunk from rum,
And others that we're like immortal women, children, and men.

Intrigued by all the tales a man will come forth
Just to ponder on this theory,
And to ponder what his life is worth.
Pondered so long he became tired and weary.

If a baby is born from one’s passed soul,
How much suffering has this soul gone through?
‘Cause if you never die when crippled life would be dull
If you die and are reborn, your life and health will renew.

Does this all sound familiar to you?
Dying and having a ‘new’ life.
Ask my old friend if you want to know the truth
The zombie is dead, but still yet alive!

Hearing this almost makes life sound like a game.
Life giving you all these extra chances.
You wish for death hope nothing will be the same
Hoping in the next life you could make advances.

would living over and over be just like never going?
It sounds like giving birth to a not-so-new born baby.
Giving your life constantly just for a different showing.
You should give up and start your whole life over... maybe.






User Comments: [3]
demonic_cow_ninja
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Sat Sep 01, 2007 @ 01:09pm


*claps* biggrin


Notional
Community Member





Sun Sep 09, 2007 @ 01:16am


i got up 2 the 2nd paragraph and got distracted... lol xp


The Autumn Wind
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Wed Oct 31, 2007 @ 03:36am


bravo


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