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It's about whatever I feel like putting
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i suddenly wake up
i am in this world of blue
i cannot breathe
i cannot move
i look around
i see blood
is it mine
yes it is
i see light
its coming closer
am i dead?
what happened?
is this a dream?
i hit the bottom
everything fades
its dark
i feel free
but then
something rough pulls me
my eyes open
its not wet
all these voices
who are they?
all these lights
i know now
i nearly drowned






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tatsku7
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 05:55pm
thats a grate poem


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 06:07pm
Interesting poem, but are you talking about your birth? What was your inspiration to write this as well?



MateusEA
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pikachu062191
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 06:15pm
its actually a person with a bashed up head that fell in a pool that nearli drowned


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 09:03pm
WOW thats very interesting



Night_Wolf_Demon
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pikachu062191
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 13, 2005 @ 09:12pm
no not really


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 15, 2005 @ 06:57am
pirate ARR he be Pirate. arr......



Kendamn
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