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My crazy, messed-up world.
song i wrote (BELIEVE ME i really did write this...)
ok this song is called One Last Time...hope you like it...comment on it



One Last Time


I stand here in the rain.
Watching you walk away.
I scream for you to come back,but you don't listen.
I cry but you can't see the tears.



Chours: I wanna see your eyes and feel your touch again.
Wanna see you face.
Hear that sweet,sweet voice...One Last Time



So thats it.
You don't answer my calls.
The memories of us,slowly fade away.
/Chours/


So now i sit here alone.
Looking at old pictures of the time we spent together.
I hear the rain,and then her your voice.
But i know everything won't be ok.
/Chours/


When I wake-up,I think of you.
Next thing I know,your at my door.
slowly

I see your eyes,and feel your touch again.
I see your face.
And get to hear that sweet,sweet voice...One Last Time.
Then i wake,to find your not here.
I try to cry,but from my eyes come no tears.



Kill or be Killed. Love or be Loved....either way you still lose




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Fatteh
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 07:44pm
Thats really good :] I like it.


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 24, 2007 @ 09:59pm
That's really good, i'm no good at writing songs, yes i've tried but realized how much i sucked at it and never tried it again. you should write more songs.



xX Let-You-Up Xx
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Blackberry Neji
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 02, 2007 @ 06:14am
smile your awesome , good job


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 02, 2007 @ 02:48pm
hey thanks you guys!!!! your the best friends ever! 3nodding



Reiko_Sazuki
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