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Nature
Have you ever noticed
That when your sad
Nature seems to reflect
How you feel?


The rain pours down,
Crieing so that the earth may drown.
The lightning strikes mercilessly
For the pain that is felt endlessly.

The birds play a requiem of sorrow,
The same song they will sing tommorow.
The ocean roars as the waves roll,
Like the anger boiling in your soul.

The mountain stands, tall and proud,
But also alone and forsaken.
The wind howls, strong and loud,
Knowing well that your heart is broken.

Rivers let the water fall,
Like tears droping from your face.
Night has always made it's call,
To remind us how we can't keep pace.

Thunder echoes across the sky,
Like a scream it wishes to be heard.
The ground shakes beneath your feet,
Letting you know how it feels your hurt.


It's a work in progress. Leave comments of advice or encouragement, please?

Copy-Righted Shadow Kilo Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 10:04am






User Comments: [6]
FireLightFox
Community Member





Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 12:59am


its cool, i like it but i would chang a few things that might make it flow better. like this
The rain pours,
cring as the earth is drown.
The thunder rolls,
a merciless pain,felt endlessly.
The birds that sing a song of sorrow,
the same that they will sing tomorrow.
As the ocean roars and the waves crash,
like angery souls boiling for eternitly.
The maountain stands, tall and proud,
but it self is alone and forseken,
The wind that howls, strong and loud,
Knowing well of hearts long broken.


and thats what i did.


sweet-owl
Community Member





Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 10:20am


this is sad but true sad


killerdeath334565664
Community Member





Wed Nov 21, 2007 @ 11:43am




iceywinterfrost1
Community Member





Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 10:31pm


i have noticed that nature dose reflect on how i feel but some times it is more me reflecting on nature sweatdrop


Shadow Kilo
Community Member





Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 11:36pm


lol, That was a hypothetical question. I wish I could cheer you up more often though.


iceywinterfrost1
Community Member





Thu Jan 17, 2008 @ 01:04am


you do cheer me up every time you talk to me i feel happier then how ever happy i am befor you were talking to me xd


User Comments: [6]
 
 
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