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DaftPunkLVR
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UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ok heres chapter 1 of my story



Hurry up your going to be late!” cried my mom as she made breakfast. “I'm coming mom!” I yelled back. So I got dressed and grabbed my backpack and headed off to the bus stop. I sat with my friend Tim as always and he told me what he got for his birthday, I couldn't go because I was in Florida over spring break. He had got a Wii and a couple games and $100 dollars in cash!
I was so jealous but my birthday was in 2 weeks so I was ok. “hey have you seen Sam?” Tim asked as we were getting off the bus. “No I don't know where else she would be though.” I said See, Sam was my best friend before I met Tim Garner in second grade, then she moved and then I got a new friend then she moved back and wouldn't talk to me now I don't know even where she is.
Thats when I say Grant Gull, the biggest Bully in the school. He had red hair and the meanest ugliest looking face you ever saw. If you even look at him the wrong way he'll snap your neck like a twig, and every year.........I was the kid he took his anger out on. So I hid behind Tim (who was bigger and taller than me) and tried to sneak past him, unfortunately he saw me.”hey wimp!” he yelled I had no choice to walk over and ready for a beating. “what did you bring for lunch squirt?” he spit into my face as he talked “I..I didn't bring a lunch today Grant.” I tried not to sound so terrified “Well then I guess ill have to beat some lunch money out of you!' he shook me dry and I ended up in the nurses office a couple minutes later. I fell pretty much unconscious and lost track of time and Tim had to come get me at 3:00 and we walked home together.
I got home and I noticed my mom wasn't home yet so I watched tv for a while and I noticed a cool commercial about shoes that glow in the dark.
Then I fell asleep and had a dream about them. I was wearing them and hanging with Sam. I felt this strange feeling.......I think I loved her. I woke with a start. My mom was shaking me, I was in the emergency room. I guess Grant shook me a little too hard. “Danny wake up, please wake up.” she said crying “mom? Where am I? Why am I?” I stammered “Danny you've been in a coma for three days.” “but thats impossible I came home and I took a nap cause you weren't home......or that was a dream too?!” “Danny calm down the doctor said not to be so active.” my mom said So I lay back trying to take this all in. Then I saw her she was in the corner crying in a chair. It was Sam.
I wanted to get up and hug her but when she saw I saw her she ran out of the E.R. and into the waiting room I could tell she was very worried and sad, which made me feel even worse for thinking she hated me. Tim looked at me and then told me everything Grant had totally hurt me and I went into the coma in the nurses office, he never walked me home or anything.




 
 
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