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River River ------------------------------------------------------------------- Do you know how it feels to live living in a river of lies surrounded by other lives swimming subconsciously along the currents ride just drifting drifting away yes drift away from reality away from what makes you real just to see where you would be down in dark waters with no reflection to see your very existence gone gone from all to see your no longer able to breath able to bleed able to see just a mere memory caught in a glimpse of time just drifting along drifting along the currents ride

Posted by: Idle Blood Fri Apr 18, 2008 @ 02:17pm

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Tiawolf
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Commented on: Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 04:42am


	Wow that was fantastic! I love how you come up with all these ideas and so far I have really been able to relate to all the poems that you have made. Great job once again!

Commented on: Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 03:34am


	idk if u ever played kingdom hearts but dis sounds dis poem like its talkin about a nobody, which is a person who relly isnt person but juss a shell of there former selfs

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Commented on: Sun Jul 13, 2008 @ 05:07am


	dude.....thats deep and yes i do its completely and utterly deppressing sweatdrop (//~)

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