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Hey! Me again....Check out the first chapter of my story and comment it! PLZ:
Breathing Under Water CH #1: Death Race
The atmosphere that surrounded me was quickly depleating. Every breath of air I took in got shorter. I thrived walking. My life is bringing me closer to the light. Everyone around me laughs, calling me names, spitting on me, torturing my family and closest friends, and they don't care. The people I once loved now laugh at me as I suffer. It's like a nightmare come to life. My fingernails carve into the wall. "Help me" they mock me, "Oh dear Lord help me."They call.
The walls slowly fade, as I begin to breath again. She
speaks to me in a soft voice. Now I am surounded by the forest. A woman stands above me. Her skin so untouched. "Beaten and torn, shredded and reborn, I call to you for your answer, young child, and you answered yes, and now I give you my simple request." She spoke in a poet's format. I was silent. "Here into your heart I put another soul, one
of a demon, and one for the death tole. Take care of these, my child of
grace, for now you start the death race." She layed her request. "What do I do my hero of grace, and how shall I start this gory death race?" I started in on the poet format. "You simply just take this syth, and put
on this white robe, and start kill one but one whom you hate the most."
The woman tried to coax me to join the ghostly death game. I took the syth and the robe, and ran off, suprisingly, the woman didn't chase after me. Grimm Robe, I read on the little card that was stuck into the robe. I put the robe on. It was really cold, and made my skin tingle.
I held the syth in my hands. " I shall only use this for my own protection. God wouldn't want me to kill for the Game Of Hate."
I whispered to myself.
I looked at the pendent that hung from my neck.
It was black with a red diamond in the middle. The red diamond was me. I was the only one in my village who believed in Christ and got mocked for it, and I guess the woman just saved me to tell me it was ok to go and kill all of the people who did mock me, and the ones that didn't died anyways.
The robe started to change color. I tried to take it off, but it sunk into my skin! I could never take it off! It was turning black. The syth's jewel turned red. Just like my pendent, which had also sunk into
my scared skin. I was tattooed by the robe and pendent, and I gasped at the sight. It suprisingly looked really beautiful, and my pants was no longer tattered and staind with blood. My skin no longer was scared. I looked more beautiful than ever.
Deciving, the look, and so seductive my facial features.The Cloak was warm, and the syth had good grip. I guess now my tole had doubled ten fold scence the promise I made. I walked the other direction and saw that the woman had disappered. I guessed she was a demon, just like everyone else in my village. I looked at the reflection in the water. I stared at myself for a little while, and then I ran off from the water I stared into before I got the ghostly makeover. My dress was now black. Night had fallen in the sky. The sun slept behind the moon, and the moon reflected in the water of the creek I ran beside the whole time. I was still running. Running, running, as the sky got deeper into the night. I sat down at a near by tree to rest.
 --BleedingHariku-- · Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 03:22am · 0 Comments |
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