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Random crap from the one and only...SATOMIDRAGON!!! i think im the ony one...right?
this will be a totaly...well...i'll just wright what im feeling, thinking about, random crap will be on too!
hey peeps? whats crackin'? its about 1:40 in texas right now...in the morning. yeah, i'm staying with grandparents for a few weeks down here XP. i'm realy bored wadda 'bout ya'll? so uh...yeah, rp is comin' long well i think...OH yeah!!! almost forgot...i'm writing a "book". yes "book" with these (" wink thing cuz its only gonna be 5 chapters but im gonna write 4 books in the series so technically it'll be 20 chapters. and i know this is probably really stupid to think it might happen, but i have some scetches, and then some, that i wanna use as cover pages ad welll...basically they suk compared to what ya'll coud do im sure (s'pecially cameron...u'vve got some talent there man...) but anyways...here comes the really stupid part...i was gonna see if i could somehow send 'em inti Shonen Jump and see if somehow they would basically re-draw them to make them...well...GOOD. if anyone AT ALL knows how i could get that goin' or can get me through to them...please PLEASE tellmeh! i'll be ur best friend!!! but uh yeah...if ya wanna sneak peek, here's part of chapter one...and PLEASE p.m. me or comment on my pro. about wat u think...ur opinion will help me cuz this is me first time actually trying to write something good not school related. just so u know, this story is about a boy and his father (hoo has been turned into a shadow...it explains in the prologue more about that) hoo were defeated a few years back in a war and so there is no more darkness in the world...soon it'll be the universe. they must risk their lives to return darkness to the world and restore the balanced order of things.





CHAPTER 1
“Ha! I still don’t understand why they ever even preserved them,” a middle class man and his girlfriend walked by the capsule in the park. “I mean, weren’t they the ones who tried to take over the universe for evil?”
Kage and Buso were still alive in that capsule, they could not hear anything, but they learned to read the emotions of those who mocked them. No one had any emotion for them except for disgust and anger in the year 2308.
“What pitiful humans. Dad, why must we take this mockery much longer?” Kage wanted revenge more than anything now.
“Hold off Kage, just a little longer. In this realm, without chaos, nothing is right. I have realized that neither light nor darkness can rule over all, that there must be an equal balance between the two.” The shadow form for had consumed Buso to0 long. He was now only a shadow, nothing more, nothing less. “And that, my son, is not what is happening at this time. We must restore the darkness that once made this realm perfect.”






thats just a smidget of ch. 1...if u want the whole thing or just the prolgue or just ch.1, p.m. me and i'll be more than happy to send u them. i am putting my time into this so dont go and and steal it OKAY? (there were supposed to be diff. paragraphs but gaia wont let me put them in...xp...and its not really futuristic, dont worry...)






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scarlettassassin00
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Thu Jul 31, 2008 @ 04:32am


thats cool xd mrgreen


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