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This one can be kinda confusing but to clarify any questions its about a girl who loved a guy who commited suicide and then she commited suicide so she could be with him.

Power

I never knew how cold
The depths of hell could be
Until you left me without life

This heart, once filled with joy
Was left to crumble
When you left

One place
One time
One heart destroyed
How could you leave me, left behind

My love for you
Remains the same
Yet in this life
I cannot stay

The cold steel
Against my head
Is welcome as I wait

To hear your voice once again
Is all really need

A finger twitch
And I'll be in bliss
Standing by your side

Soon, I'll be in you arms
Standing before His throne

Hand in hand
I'll follow you
No matter which way we go






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3rd Octave
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 16, 2009 @ 06:06am
well, i really like how you wored this but i think i still like the first poem better. still, the ending lines for this really complete the poem. it's wonderful!
well...if you think about it...not really...ha ha.
dead people. whee


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