You can post comments or suggestions, ect. Umm just another poem, i'm just making it up as I'm typing, so I may update it every now and then, if I'm not lazy. Uh and don't expect it to be awsome, unless if it is then, well your opinion, write down whatever you think, I do care and I don't care at the same time.
Title: NO TITLE (you may make suggestions for a title to help or I may use your suggestion!)
The sun rises up bringing light to the day
just to start another long day of who knows what
so I just prepare to get over today
trying to keep both my eyes shut
as I was a preditor before and now I'm just the prey
From all the wrong I have done
And try to learn the right
Cuz I could have held up the gun
just to finish the fight
Cuz I just grew weary of the war
that I have fought between myself
just wanted to get away from all the gore
because it just came too dangerous itself
Now I found the light a fade
and the dark shines brighter than any star
I just picked up the blade
to cut off from growing this scar
But I was able to make it
all the way across the sea
one of the hardest jobs I've got to admit
trying to get away from losing yourself any second you've got to agree
By: G4Server
Title: NO TITLE (you may make suggestions for a title to help or I may use your suggestion!)
The sun rises up bringing light to the day
just to start another long day of who knows what
so I just prepare to get over today
trying to keep both my eyes shut
as I was a preditor before and now I'm just the prey
From all the wrong I have done
And try to learn the right
Cuz I could have held up the gun
just to finish the fight
Cuz I just grew weary of the war
that I have fought between myself
just wanted to get away from all the gore
because it just came too dangerous itself
Now I found the light a fade
and the dark shines brighter than any star
I just picked up the blade
to cut off from growing this scar
But I was able to make it
all the way across the sea
one of the hardest jobs I've got to admit
trying to get away from losing yourself any second you've got to agree
By: G4Server
I am thinking about just to make this a song of some sort instead of a poem, only cuz I wanted to make a song for some time now, if you comment thanks a lot, for any suggestions. Yet again, my opinion, it's not so good but it's a start on making it better.
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