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Ok im going to write a story about vampires and werewolves!! Please comment on it!


Preface

My eyes shot open to dark room that was poorly lit. The door in front of me was opened to a slight crack, letting in the orange light coming from the other room inside. I walked toward the door and when it was within touching distance, it opened up slowly. To my surprise a beautifully decorated room laid in front of me. Paintings were scattered around the dark rooms, and funiture was littered on the floor. But this wasn't what caught my attention, it was the pale figure in front of me that stood completely still in front of the open fire in the mantlepiece.
My fragile heart pulsed blood throughout my body making adrenaline rush through my veins. It felt extremely good but why the sudden power? And then it was the emotion of fear. It flickered in my heart as my brain took in my surroundings and the white male- because his muscular build was to much for a womans-<---(not to be mean about))) sweatdrop
I suddenly reconsidered the fear and ran towards him out of sudden impulse. He suddenly turned towards me and embraced me tightly. I instantly felt cold as his fingers wrapped around my bare arms. I inhaled deeply his scent deeply almost like he could dissapear or i would wake up. But he suddenly released me in a split second and he screamed loudly. I felt instantly rejected but pain for the throbbing person.
He looked up at me and laughed quietly
" Im sorry"
One more scream and he lunged.



There!!! Ill write more if i get comments. Not bad ones though...... emo emo 3nodding