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Ok, I wrote this with in thirty minutes, so be nice...
I could picture it like it was only yesterday; it was Christmas Eve, the smell of fire invaded my mind, making it easy to clear my thoughts. My two friends where sitting right next to me, trying to keep warm from the snow. I let my mind wander for a little bit, back to my family. They would be sleeping now, in their nice warm beds, while I was on night watch. It was a silent night, nothing made a sound, but I knew that something was out there, watching, waiting. I knew that my friends didn't hear it, because they where still talking in whispers, but I did. A twig snapped in half not that far away, so I turned around to see who, or what, was there. My breathing increased as I saw nothing but trees and darkness around me, but I knew that something was there, lurking in the trees, waiting to pounce. Paranoia started to creep over me. I guessed my friends felt me stirring right besides them, and asked what was wrong. I just stayed quiet, they understood my silence and went to go and warn the general in the tent about five yards away. I grabbed my rifle right next to me, i always kept it loaded during my watch just in case.
Minutes passed. Nothing. Then, I heard it, a gun fire about one mile away. Birds flew from overhead.
and that is as far as I got in it... if you liked it, can you tell me if you did or not in comments and what i could fix in it. just so you know, i am going to add more when i get this done tomorrow or the next day... so dont bother me saying that i should finish it, because i am... thx! ^_^
 Lullaby of Fallen Angels · Thu Dec 04, 2008 @ 01:02am · 0 Comments |
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