But it's what I feel most of the time now....
I want to slit my wrists when I think about you and what my life has become.
I wanna die while I'm thinking of you.
I wanna leave and never come back.
You have caused pain in my life.
I just want to be done!
I hate you!
I want to kill you!
...I have to forgive you....
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Cutting your wrists isn't the smart thing to do.
It wont end the pain you feel by hurting yourself.. You have to gradually get over them/him/she slowly.
Sometimes distancing yourself from them helps.
But besides that, I like how you wrote the ending very much.
"I hate you!
I want to Kill you!
...I have to forgive you..."
I would have written it differently..
which would have made it would terrible.
Thats why i like how you wrote that.
Good job.
~~Max-a-Million