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Another [Lame] Poem I wrote at 2am.
1-19-08; [Edited paragraph 3 and 4]

She looked at him with shock
Waiting anxiously and looking at the clock
He got on his knees and begged her please
"Baby, will you marry me?"
And in her reply
She left a tear
Leaving him confused
And watching her disappear

He drove home
All sad and alone
Walked up the stairs
With no emotion shown
He took out a sheet of paper
And started to write;

"Baby, you are my light
And without you I would die
Every moment I'm without you
I'm a complete mess
Struggling with all the depression and stress
I can't imagine living without you
I guess tonight was just the wrong time
Love makes a person go blind
As I said before
You are my light" ____

He paused for a moment
And started to cry
He then continued
"And without you I would die
Here are my last words;
I love you and goodbye"

He took that gun and put it to his head
Pulled the trigger and he fell onto his bed
The girl came in, just a second too late, dropped to her knees
As she saw her lover die and quickly bleed
She read the note and took the gun
Looked inside of it, one, one bullet, one

She layed beside him and took the gun
Pulled the trigger and they layed there as one

She died in his arms
And together they lay
On that very same bed
Up until this day






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BoobyMonster
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 18, 2009 @ 08:47pm
that was really good, and it was sad...


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 19, 2009 @ 12:51am
... D;
that was sad
now I'm all teary
I'll just blame that on my mom
cooking onions down stairs for dinner.



MorganAndYou
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5thmonth
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 20, 2009 @ 04:46am
seems like a romeo and juliet thing going on there somewhat XD
you seemed to struggle in the beginning, but got better throughout the rest of the poem, lol
very good! ^-^

PS i have some poems on deviantart, if you want to look at them:
http://malinca.deviantart.com/


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 23, 2009 @ 04:38am
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BoobyMonster
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