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. I pressed on, running for my life. Animals scattered ahead to get away from the inferno. A column of fire shot up, sending me backwards onto my rear. The only option I had was to run. Run as fast as I could. In my haste, i forgot to run in a different direction, for there was a cliff up ahead..
. "s**t!!" I screamed as i looked backwards and then down.
. I jumped. I plunged into the icy depths of the lake. My teeth started to chatter, I then panicked and tensed up. All I saw when I came up was the burning forest and my brother, Raynell.
. "So brother, had enough?" Raynell said with an odd smirk on his face.
. I got up and ran through the burnt brush, ignoring him altogether. Raynell, in his gold and black robe, dashed to make his fiery sword meet my flesh and burn me from the inside out.
. "Don't you ever give up?" Raynell said with disgust showing in his voice and his face.
. I tripped, spilling my blood on the soil. I noticed there was a rock in my leg, but I paid it no mind. Then, in that second, Raynell had his sword at my throat. The adrenalin coursed through my vains.
. "Any last words?" Raynell said with the same smirk.

Okay. I have edited it. I must say it was easy. Not many errors in it. xd