Outcry-Chapter 3-The Other Side
"Jack... pick up!" Azuleas shut his pheon then recieved a call. He was standing in Hong Kong on a small building. "This old Dragon headquarters you came to Jack?"
"Shut up, I'll be on the tall skyscraper in mid-town." Jack hung up.
Jack walked onto the skyscraper. "Give me the Rose Katana, it's my father's blade, not yours." Jack removed his claymore ready to strike.
"At least someone can keep their word." Azuleas threw the katana back at Jack, it came off the sheath and stuck in the wall. Jack turned from the blade and pulled a gun on Azuleas, his orange hair glowing in the moonlight.
"That blade contains blood of my family, you dare to infuse mine with it?" Jack saw bullets coming at him. "A lesson eh?" Jack dodged them and noticed someone walk up. "Amalia?" Jack stared at her in disbelief for a moment.
After the blast, Jack was sure Amalia was dead and gone. Tears, for the first time in a long time rolled down Jack's face. Amalia saw Jack begin crying. "I hid in the bunker. The blast only shook me up and left me with a few scars." Amalia wiped away the tears and gently kissed Jack.
Jack stopped and turned to Azuleas. "You... You planned this, this is my lesson? Why not tell me Amalia was alive for this long!" Jack yelled.
"She just came to me rec..." Azuleas fell with the tranquilizer that Jack had hit him in the neck with.
"Jack! What the heck?" Amalia yelled. Jack tuned and went to his bedroom.
Th next morning Jack woke to Amalia shaking himyelling some slurred phrases. "Jack... Azuleas... Gone! Valkyrie.... outside and.... rooftop..." Amalia gripped her shotgun and shot another down the stairs. She kicked Jack abruptly off the bed. "Help!" Amalia threw him his revolvers and a shotgun.
"Only revolvers, no minigun? I don't want to miss!" Jack saw Amalia turn and shot down the appraoching Valkyrie. Jack ran to the roof to see a helicopter leaving sight. "Azuleas!" Jack yelled loud enough to hear at the helicopter. Jack picked off an officer and saw the Valkyrie begin to retreat.
"Where in the world am I?" Azuleas yelled while removing the blindfold. "Brothers... Reaver, Colt! Wait, where's Rya..."
"Azuleas, I'm over here, I'm testing with item 46-2... the Valkyrie's source of power... Jack's Valkyr drug." Ryan said removing rubber gloves and moving around Colt and Reaver to hug Azuleas "Welcome back Azul."
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Sorry, but I changed the name because Outcry, the story being wrote in here is being called the Final Diary, IT'S OUTCRY!
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For example instead of Jack simply hanging up when hes angry he actually thows the receiver down in his anger to emphasize his fury.
or instead of noticing someone walk up he hears the soft pad of footsteaps coming closer and whips around. "Amelia?" Jack stared at her in disbelief, but for only a fleeting second, then it was gone. "Wha-. What happened??? Why ar- how are you still here???" She was supposed to be dead. Gone for ever. As tears, for the first time in seemingly forever, ran down his cheeks in streams of sorrow, and happiness at once.
But this is coming from someone who is still to afraid to put up her work so dont take the advice if ya dont want it babe^^ Best of luck with the story babe. The plot seems just fantastic. i cant wait to read more of it. Its simply amaing^^