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dragon's journal: Now with 25% more crickets.. (comments apprectiated)
poems, drawings, some life
Broken

Searching through this darkness i find myself alone
Left here by another who broke my heart in two
Now i wander through this maze with no one at my side
I stand alone with my heart shattered fear within my mind
not sure where to go from here I recall days long past
Remembering the words you said that tore my world apart
Now i fear what i once had and envy those in love
Knowing that its just no use to want what I cant have
So now i stand here on my own the way it used to be
And maybe someday I will find the one thats meant for me






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Yukiko Minamino
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 21, 2006 @ 04:46am
crying so beautiful


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 21, 2006 @ 05:24am
Excellent poem. Both heartwrenching and elegant.



Emrys_Tal
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Robertp3001
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 25, 2006 @ 12:52am
Words can not describe this poem.


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 15, 2007 @ 02:23pm
I know the feeling.Good poem though



Lyt Keeper
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Shanra the Dragon Bard
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 03, 2009 @ 12:33am
Hello Tala. I found your name somewhere, don't remember now, and made a note of it to look you up. I too, call myself a poet and must say, you're one of the few I've come across that can actually write. Look me us sometime and we'll talk.


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