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This is my revised copy of my story!Enjoy heart


The night fog crept in on the 3 story old mansion. A young girl was said to roam these parts of the island. Those who lived here moved away years ago. Only one family lives here. The parents of the young girl who died many years ago. I am not going to tell you one of those story of how the whole family gets killed. No I am going to tell you the story of the young girl and how she came to be the hauting of Clearwater-brooke island.

In the morning of June 1996. A memorial service was being held for a girl that died in the night on June 5th. This girl was said to be cursed from the day she was born. A punishment on the family of this child. She was said to bring the misfortune from the past of others. The guest took there spots around the coffin of which she was laying in. Her bones already showing, her eyes had black circles under them. Her wound was showing, scaring the image that her family use to know. The wound had blacked and had not recieved medical care. Because she was dead when they found her. People believed she had done suicide. As dusk began to approach they all started to leave. But then a shadow seemed to land over the child. Her body started to move...."I thought she was dead" muttered a women; the mother. With pure terror shaking her voice.

"Mother! Father!" the dead child called
"You did this! You killed me! You now have all the misfortune upon you. Father you shot me! Mother you stabbed me! Why? Why? why?" the child whailed a scream that burst through the crowd.

"NO ONE LEAVES YOU ALL MUST DIE BECAUSE OF MY PARENTS!!!!" the child crackled with evil now consuming her.

"Angel don't!" Screamed her father

"Pathetic fool. YOU DID THIS YOU BROUGHT THIS ON YOUR SELF!" Angel screamed, her eyes darkened. Then she lifted up her hands and creature with black wings and horns came out of the ground.

In the beginning i told you that i would not tell you how the parents died but...now your wondering how they escaped this fate. How the others lived. How they ran away....one answer scarifice.

A small man with a book ran up to the ghost of the child Angel and started to chant the ancient words of Dusk Clearwater, the one who created the island.
"Dark world of those who bring fear; gone. By taking who him is standing here to banish this creature to the roam of the floating passers. Take me instead and give me to hell of those of the dark man." the man said speaking in a different language. Then a black spear rose from the ground and pierced the man. The man screamed in pain as the spear sent black shadows of death into the man. Then he stopped moving.


You think this is the end?...Now my childern I tell you no this is just the beginning but how 'bout i leave you wondering or shaking in fear how ever this happens to end you may know or you may never know......just wait for the next

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    Tue Jun 02, 2009 @ 03:53pm


    feedback please! heart heart blaugh 3nodding heart heart


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