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"Did you closet throw up or something?" add an 'r' to 'you' so it will make more sense.

“Ryan is take me out to dinner.” change 'take' to 'taking'

there is a bracket after Ian is talking

Standing in front of the long mirror, she twirled, making her dress left just a little bit. “So what do you thing?” change 'left' to 'lift' and 'thing' to 'think'

“I was you to be surprised when you see it. Close your eyes.” the first sentence here...it doesn't make much sense. maybe change 'was' to 'wanted' or restructure this sentence.

Ryan walked back other to Natalie and held out his hand. change 'other' to 'over'

that's it! simple little typos that change a lot of the meaning.