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Ok so this is a story that I made on www.fanfiction.net a while ago. so I'm going to put it here. And I would love if you guys could tell me what you think and give me ideas of your own for a new story idea!!! But now it is time to read my story.

In a location unknown

BANG!
BANG!
BANG!
BANG!

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”

“MOMMY NO!”

Silence.

“MOM!”

“Hey get back here you little brat!”

Right now we have arrived right in the middle of a brake in. The robbers just killed the mother of the poor little male red wolf about the age of 12. He wore a white tang top, baby blue shorts with a hole in the back for his tail (duh), and brown sandals. The mother just pushed her child out of the way from gun shoots, and in return, she was killed. Now the male wolf Juan is running out of the house and trying to get to safety.

“Listen I’ll go get the kid and you get the goods. Got it?” Asked a blue hedgehog (not Sonic the Hedgehog).

“Fine.” Said the other robber a brown hawk.

Minutes later the two robbers meet back in the dinning room to discuss their progress. The only thing they didn’t know was that Juan ran out of the house with only the clothes on his back.

“Damn it were did he go?!” Cried the hedgehog.

“How the hell should I know? You were the one who was chasing him.” Said the hawk.

“Oh I’m sorry I lost him. So sue me! But you did get the goods right?”

“Hell yeah!”

“Good now lets get out of here.”

“But why don’t we show the world what we are made of.”

“Alright do what ever you want but I’m going back to the base.”

“Don’t worry I won’t be long” Said the hawk with a smirk.


Now with Juan who is still running

Here we meet Juan again only he is crying with blood on his knees. But hey if you were his age you would cry to after losing your mom to right? And plus his dad died years before. Oh and the blood is just cuts he got when he tried to get out of his home. This stupid kid jumped through a window! A damn window for crying out loud!

Why did this happen to me? He thought as he ran. What did I do to deserve this?!

The next day

House burned to the ground, Susie Jackson found dead, and her 12 year old son Juan Jackson is missing. Said a news reporter. Police is on a search to find the killers and to find the lost child. Reward of $500 will be given to who ever finds the killers or the red wolf.

“Well it looks like I have a job to do.” Said a grey raccoon. He was wearing a black west and black shorts.

This raccoon does have a name but I’d rather not say it just yet.

Now in the woods

Right now Juan is still sleeping in a tent he made out of leaves and branches. He is dreaming of the good times and bad times he had with his family.

Flashback

“Honey time for dinner! Come and get it!” Cried Susie.

“Alright mom I’m coming!” Said Juan.

“So how was your day?”

“It was awesome! Me, Juliet, and Iggy all went down to the old dam in the woods and talked about what ever the heck we wanted to!”

“Sounds like you guys had fun.”

“We did but the best thing was when we went swimming in the river! And Iggy caught a fish in his mouth! It was so funny!”

“Wow I wish I could had of came with you!”

“Oh mom you know you couldn’t come because you had to mak-“

BOOM!

“What was that?!” Cried Juan.

“I don’t kn- Juan get out.” Said Sissy with concern.

“What?”

“GET OUT OF THE WAY!”

BANG!
BANG!
BANG!
BANG!

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”

Silence.

“MOM!!!!” Cried Juan as he sat straight up hitting his head on his home-made tent.

Just then tears started coming down his face. He felt hurt. Not from the cuts on his legs, or from the bump on his head, it was from the pain from his heart. He wanted his mommy and daddy back, more than anything he has ever wanted before.

I swear when I find who did this I will…I will… He thought as his face got more and more red.

CRACK!!

What was that?!

CRACK!!!!

Ok I think I should get out of here. NOW!

And he did. He ran out of his home-made tent (which feel apart) and ran deeper into the woods. Soon he was deeper than he has ever been. He had no idea were he was but he kept on running. Juan kept running for about 5 minutes before he stopped. He was trying to catch his breath. He then looked around to only see black. Deep, dark, unforgiving black. This was because he was so deep in the woods that the trees blocked most of the sun light. But there was some here and there but that’s beside the point.

How is that possible? Oh forget that for now Juan! Lets try to figure out who is here or who isn’t here.

“Hello? Is anyone out there?” Cried Juan in a scared tone.

“Boo!” Said a strange voice out of no were. This voice was very dark and spooky though.

“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!” He cried while falling to the ground.

“Hahaha that was as funny as I thought it would be!”

“Hey that wasn’t funny! Wait, who are you?” He asked first with anger then with fear.

“Oh I’m Santa! And I just stopped by to give you your gift for being a good boy this year.”

“Oh haha very funny! But really who are you?!” Asked Juan as he got up.

“You can call me Shadow!”

Just then a male black lion wearing a black T-shirt and black pants with no shoes jumped out from the trees above and landed right in front of Juan. Juan only looked at him with wonder in his eyes. He wanted to know how he did that and why he was here.

“So what’s your name little kid?”

“It’s Juan. And I am not a little kid! I am almost 13!”

“Oh sorry, but nice to meet you Juan! What brings you to this neck of the woods?” Said Shadow while shaking Juan’s hand as hard as he could.

“I was chased out of my house and I ran for cover here. Then I heard a loud cracking sound and I ran further in. But why does it matter to you?” Juan said while gaining back his hand and the felling that came with it.

“Because I can help you out here son.”

“Oh really. How do you expect to do that?”

“Let me tell you this, I have been here for about oh say 5 years so that means I know how to survive.”

“Well good for you. But why haven’t you left yet?”

It took a while for Shadow to answer this question. He knew the way out but he never left.

“I don’t know why.” He said under his breath.

“What? What do you mean you don’t know?” Asked Juan.

“I mean what I said. I don’t know why I don’t leave, I know the way out but I chose not to go.”

“Weird. Did something happen to you that made you come here?”

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…
…

“Hello?! Are you there?!” Said Juan who saw Shadow space out.

“Huh? Or sorry. I don’t really remember. All I remember is when I was 10 I woke up and found my self here. I looked around to find my mom and dad but I couldn’t find them. But instead I found the way out 2 years later.”

“Wow. I know how it feels to lose your mom and dad.” Said Juan after looking at a locket around his neck. Inside it (on the left) was a picture of Susie in a white wedding dress and there was another figure. It was his father José. He was wearing a black and white tux with a red tie. This was his parents wedding picture. There was another a picture (on the right) with Susie, José, and Juan were all sitting down for their family portrait. Just then he started to cry.

“Hey are you ok?”

“Yeah. Yeah I’m fine.”

“You don’t look it.”

“Oh who asked you?! Anyway all I want to do now is go home. So see you later or never Shadow.

“Wait you aren’t going the right way!”

But it was to late for Juan ran even more deeper in to the woods in hopes that he finds the way out.

“Well it looks like I am baby-sitting tonight.” Said Shadow as he ran after Juan.

Unknown place

“What do you mean you couldn’t find him?!” Cried a male light grey puma. He wore a black tux. Not very special is it?

Right now we are in an old abandoned warehouse were we see the two robbers again. The room only has one light so it is really dark. But the only thing under the light is an old rung about 10 years old that was brown with a big circle in the middle, which is a darker brown. You can also see a grey tile on the rest of the floor.

“I’m sorry Walter but we couldn’t find the kid!” Cried the blue hedgehog (still not Sonic).

“Yeah he must had of ran out of the house!” Said the brown hawk.

“I don’t care! All I want is him found and brought here!”

Just then there was a silence between the three.

“WELL WGAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!?!? GO OUT AND FIND HIM!!”

“Yes sir we will get right on it!” Cried the hawk as he grabbed his comrade and ran out the door.

“Alright. YOU! YES YOU THERE! Bring in John. I have a mission for him.” Said Walter with a laugh. It was a laugh that a man would have. A man mad with power.

End

Ok so it wasn't the same way I made this on line but it is really close. But anyway that was the first chapter! I hope you liked it!!! And please tell me what you think ok?