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Yeah this is the third and finally chapter. I hope you like the conclustion of Juan Sad Story!!!

With Juan, Shadow and Brenden

Shadow was still banging on the door as hard as he could. He was also screaming as loud as he could. But Brenden was getting close to breaking the code that locked the door. He was only 4 numbers away. And Juan was still laying in the bed and talking back to Shadow.

“Ok I’m almost done Shadow! I only have a few more numbers to go!” Said Brenden.

“WELL HURRY!!!!!” Shouted Shadow. He really wanted to see Juan again.

“I’m working as fast as I can!!! Don’t rush me!!!”

“I’M NOT!!!!”

“Then stop yelling at me!!!!”

“FINE!!!”

“There! It’s done.”

Then the door opened and Shadow ran in. Followed by Brenden.

“JUAN!!!!” Shadow shouted as he ran over to his friend on the bed.

“SHADOW!!!!” Juan cried. He was happy to see him again.

“Oh how sweet.” Said Walter.

Everybody turned around to see Walter in the door way. And no one said anything.

“Oh what isn’t anyone happy to see me?” He asked.

“No!” Shouted Juan.

“But I’m happy to see you Juan.” Walter said as he walked toward Juan.

“Don’t hurt him!!” Shouted Shadow as he got in Walter’s way.

“Step aside kid.”

“NO!!!!”

Walter didn’t like this kid one bit. He was getting in the way of all his plans. So he just pushed Shadow into the other wall.

“Hey!!!” Shouted Brenden. He then tried to kick Walter but he grabbed his leg and threw him in the other direction.

“SHADOW!!! BRENDEN!!!!” Shouted Juan who could only watch.

“Now it’s time to finish what I started” Said Walter as he went to grab Juan again. But Juan bit his arm as hard as he could and he stayed on. “OW!!! YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!”

BANG!!!! BANG!!!! BANG!!!!

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Screamed Walter.

“Take that Walter.” Said John as he entered the room.

Juan was almost shocked to John helping him but he then remembered.

“SHADOW!!! BRENDEN!!!” Shouted Shawna as she ran toward the two to make sure they were ok.

“OK THAT’S IT!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Walter screamed. He then slammed Juan into a wall, kicked John into the ceiling, and started to run after Shawna. However, she saw this coming and she blacked flipped at the right time. And so Walter ran into a wall. But he was near Shadow who bit his leg. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! GET OFF ME!!!!!”

“NEVER!!!” Shadow said through his teeth. Walter was getting really pissed and he started hitting Shadow hard on the wall. But he only bit harder and harder every time he hit the wall.

“Shadow! No stop!!” Shouted Juan as he tried to get up.

“Oh look! It looks like you can finally stand now. Good for you!” Said Walter while still banging Shadow hard on the wall.

“Stop this now Walter! It’s me you want. So stop hurting my friends.”

“Juan no!!” Said Shadow. Then Walter hit Shadow really hard on his back (which was still hurting) and he finally let go.

“I’m glad you finally realized this.”

“Juan!!! You don’t have to do this!!!” Shouted Shadow. But after saying this, Walter kicked him in the stomach.

“Yes I do Shadow. I want to make sure you guys aren’t in anymore pain. So I have to do this.” Said Juan.

“Juan please!!!” He shouted.

“Shadow stop. You are only making this harder than it needs to be.”

“Please Juan!!! Stop this!! I can’t let you go!!!”

“I’m sorry Shadow.”

A tear came down Juan’s face. He didn’t want to do this but he knew it was the only way. “Alright Walter, lets go.”

“Juan no!!!!” Shouted Shadow as he ran toward Juan. But Walter grabbed him and sent him to the wall again. And after that, Juan and Walter walked out of the door. Nobody moved or said anything for a while. They were quiet for about five minuets until it was broken by someone crying. It was Shadow who was crying. Shawna, Brenden and John were surprised that he was. Then Shawna slowly got up and walked over to Shadow to comfort him.

“It’s going to be ok Shadow.” She said as she stroked his head.

“No it’s not!!! I might never see Juan again!!!” He cried.

“Shadow look at me. We all have lost friends in the past.”

“You have?”

“Yes. Isn’t that right Brenden?”

“Yeah! Hell I’ve probably lost about ten close friends. Most of them went to war and others moved and I never saw them again.” Said Brenden.

“And John haven’t you lost any close friends?” Asked Shawna.

“Yes.” Said John with regret.

“What happened to them?” Asked Shadow who is felling a tiny bit better.

“My home town was ambushed by these people. They killed anything and everything in their path. Women, children, and even seniors. There were only 25 survivors. I was lucky enough to get away from all that.” Said John.

“Oh.” Said Shadow.

“I could of helped save some of my friends. But I was a coward!” Said John as he squeezed his hand.

“Hey it’s ok John.” Said Brenden as he got closer to John to comfort him.

“No it’s not alright!!!! These people were my only friends and I left them behind!!!” John said as he slammed his hand into the wall.

“Hey, hey calm down.” Said Brenden.

But John didn’t. Instead he ran out the door.

“Wow. I hope he’ll be ok.” Said Shawna as John came back.

“Hey I just realized something.” Said John as he started to search the room.

“What?” Asked Shadow.

“Has anyone seen my gun?” Asked John who turned around to look at everybody.

“Ummmmmm no. Why?” Asked Brenden.

BANG!! BANG!! BANG!!!

“Uhhhh that’s why!” Said John as everyone ran out of the building.

With Juan and Walter before the shoots

“So what made you give yourself up?” Asked Walter.

“I didn’t want to see my friends get any more hurt.” Said Juan.

“Well that was very brave for a kid oh your age.”

“Yeah I know. And it was also dumb.” Said Juan with regret.

“Why would you say that?” Asked Walter.

“Because someone could be killed by this.”

“What do you mean.” Asked Walter before he stopped walking.

“Well a lot of people in the past who have been kidnapped get killed in the end.” Said Juan.

“That is true. But you said someone.”

“Yes I did.”

“Yeah but what do you mean by that?”

“This.” Said Juan as he took out John’s gun.

“What the?! How did you?” Asked Walter as he backed up.

“Oh I found it on the floor.” Said Juan.

“So that’s why you turned your self in.”

“Yeah.”

“I’m impressed.”

“Thanks. Now it’s time for you to die!” Said Juan as he pointed the gun at Walter’s heart.

“Ok now kid don’t do anything hasty now.” Said Walter.

“For the last time, I’m not a kid.” Said Juan.

BANG!! BANG!! BANG!!!

“Ugh!” Said Walter. He then fell to the ground with blood around him.

Just then John, Shadow, Shawna, and Brenden ran out of the warehouse. And only Shadow didn’t gasp. Instead he kept running and hugged Juan who hugged him back.

“Juan! I’m so glad your ok!” Said Shadow. And he started to cry again.

“Shadow are you… crying?!” Asked Juan.

“Yeah. I guess I am.”

“Why?”

“It’s just because I missed you ok?”

“Ok I guess.”

“Awwwwwwwww! Now that’s sweet!!” Said Shawna.

“Yes it is Shawna. Yes it is.” Said Brenden.

“Hey wait a minuet. Shawna you never answered my question.” Said Shadow as he broke up the hug.

“What question?” She asked.

“The one I asked back at the other warehouse. Remember?”

“Oh now I remember!”

“Wait what’s the question?” Asked Juan who didn’t know what was going on.

“I asked Shawna if she knew what was going on with you.” Said Shadow.

“Yes and you see Juan’s family has a long history for being great, strong men. And one day, his great, great, great, great, great, great grandfather made a spell. This spell made one of the men in the line go mad with strength. But it only happens when all the planets a line. And apparently Juan was one of those men who were unlucky enough to be picked for this.” She said.

“Wow. So that’s why Walter wanted me.” Said Juan.

“Yeah.”

“But why did he need me in all of this?” Asked Shadow.

“They say the men need a sacrifice to be at their full power. So he picked you Shadow.” Said Shawna.

“But why couldn’t he pick anybody else?! Why did it have to be me?!”

“Because you’re close with Juan. And Walter knew Juan didn’t want you to get hurt. So that’s why we took you for ransom.” Said John.

“Wow. You poor kid.” Said Brenden.

“Hey wait a minuet. Where’s Walter?!” Asked Shawna who saw that his body wasn’t there anymore.

“I don’t know! Hey look there’s a note!” Said Juan as he picked up a note.

It said:

Dear you idiots,
You probably though I was dead. But you’re wrong! That was a dummy I made a long time ago. And unluckily for you, I’m still on the loose!!! So good luck finding me!! And one last thing. This is for Juan, I still have your powers!!!! So good luck getting them back!!
With hate,
Walter

“Well that’s just great!!!” Said Shadow.

“Not really.” Said Shawna. Everybody looked at her like she was nuts.

“What do you mean not really?! He still has my strength!!!” Shouted Juan.

“There was one thing I forgot to tell you. The strength doesn’t last that long. By now he has about 2 seconds left with it.”

“Really?!” Asked Brenden.

“Yup!”

“Wow that’s a relief!” Said John.

“Yeah! Now we can all rest up easily tonight.” Said Shadow.

End

Ok so thats the end! Hope that who ever read this story liked it! And please tell me how you did and any ideas for another story ok? Well bye!!!